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Waking to Dragons and Elves

Fantasy 35 章節 153.8K 流覽
作者: JHarper

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Emyr, known to many as a reckless teenager, only knowing how to fight in and against gangs, enough to come home beaten up daily but sometimes coming out better than his enemies.
Unfortunately for him, in this new world, humans aren't the top of the food chain. Instead of gangs, he will fight goblins as he attempts to find a place to live with his little sister Elyn.

A heartwarming story, but not for the faint hearted. Some men will do anything to protect their family, sometimes at the cost of themselves.

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Author note
I'm not the best at writing, and I don't plan to be, but if you have corrections, please mention them nicely and I'll try to cover the more important ones.
I used to write to get better at my english writing; lets hope it pays off eventually this time.

When I write books, I decide what they know from the start, I decide who they were and what they care about.
I also have little to no control over what happens, everything is up to how the character themselves explores the world.

Basically, I write freestyle and that works for me.
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Yes wow, another 'original story' about going to another world.

Well look on the bright side, my favourite genres in books are fantasy but I always love me a bunch of dark psychology books about the mind and what people will do to survive and all the darkness people hold.

This world has been created, in detail.
This means that my worldbuilding and planning have been going on for a while before this book.

While there might be exposition, I don't need to make errors with inconsistencies due to everything already existing.

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JHarper
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Being semi-objective with my rating on how I see the project going. The book will be quite slow, building up the world and all the parts of it. The two characters the book focuses on, Elyn and Emyr will each get their own perspectives later on in the book as each has their story to tell, I will possibly write it alternating at a future date once I feel everything has been established. Lore about my world: The world is in the universe of Maphere, and is set as an alternate 'real world' even to the degree that our world is considered part of the story, refered to as the 'lost world'. I hope to keep developing the world but the story about Emyr and Elyn takes place a few hundred years before the current date of my worldbuilding is at now.

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5yr
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JHarper
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This author keeps forgetting to update, its almost as if they have a life to focus on or something, they tried to make promises of a release rate over the holidays and couldn't keep that up when it came to worktime. This author needs to get their priorities straight.

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5yr
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Brenin

ive read upto chapter 10 and can say that i like the story with the characters and world however with that said the story is a little slow paced and so ive found that i like to read it at a slow pace to match only reading a chapter or 2 a day even if more are out. now with regards to the writing quality and stability of updates for the novel ive given both five stars as the story is very clear and easy to understand with little to no writing mistakes(at least if there are any then they arent big enough for me to take notice), the story is also updated regularly so far.

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Avamagic

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