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Honestly the writing quality is great but personally the story is just way too dark for me. i was enjoying the Novel quite a bit at the start but a soon as Ella was introduced into the story it went full on cannibalism down to the minute details of savoring a the flavor of a living person. The author may need to seek mental treatment.
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Great story, lots of fun, bit brutal which makes it more captivating, each character introduced gets their moment to shine, world building was great and done in some entertaining ways, would recommend.
Sigh to be honest this one of best apocalypse novel I had ever read and apocalypse is my favourite genre. Sadly author not appreciate work much....its had been hiatus for too long. Hope author change his mind
Protagonist run from asylum, story lacks interesting scenario, making yourself feel disgusting with all this crunch and munch..............
One of the best novels I've read in a while the author is on hiatus now but promises to make a triumphant return(hopefully), I'm just looking forward to future updates.
good setup, trash MC, basically all there is to it, no worth in reading unless you want a coward, idiotic, overly emotional about everything MC that almost gets himself killed but only survives thanks to plot armour.
I love the story but I feel like it’s unnecessary to add Ella even if she my fav character but other than that I don’t have much complains except they should add more chapters
Right so here we go 1:writing quality Every(most) chapter has mistakes with grammar this would honestly be alright and you probably wont notice if you read quickly but whats ticks me off is that the mistakes repeat,now the author sounds like a nice person so as a dude who likes this novel I wanna tell em to reread the chapter's before hosting them.3 out of 5 stars 2:stability of Updates Cant help much here (just caught up)(I'll keep at 5 stars until I got more info on here) 3:story development Smooth,sometimes I feel its a bit too fast,plot twists are a bit predictable some times not but otherwise alright story development.4 out of 5 stars 4:character design Now I can tell author puts a lot of time on making sure everything a character is plausible and yeah honestly most of the time mc sounds like a person,its refreshing to see better character design than most crap novels on here,but sometimes mc does stupid things.theres a fight at the end of volume 1 where I feel mc got protected by plot armour,and mc is a but broken but everything is in the realm of possibility.also I like that the names are not confusing and I can keep track of who is who. a rough 4 out of 5 stars 5:world background Its Described beautifully easy 5 out of 5 stars
Awesome dark apocalypse novel with good story and mc progression. The system is not over used but still shows the mc having a good growth rate. Good action and portrayal of emotions. Only criticism would be the jumping back and forth of POVs mid way to show a bunch of “trailers” which drags on for a while.
Keep up the great work. Please don't drop the story. I still can't believe how many different elements got put in the story. It was a bit confusing at first because after a while you as the reader get thrown down the rabbit hole. Then from there its like being put on a never ending rollercoaster.
I've read all these chapters within one day because I couldn't put the phone down. It's addictive to read the story. Sorry no spoilers from me read it for yourself.
Nice story, but the problem is you didn't put whose POV I'm reading and I'm confused at first but I'm used to it by now but please put who's POV I'm reading at the top and I'm also confused about Vol 3 Idk why but I'm lost and Idk what is happening.
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The best original novel I’ve come across in the apocalypse genre. There are game elements and the undead. A really likable/relatable main character. There is some gore and heavy stuff but not gratuitous. This is sort of like what I wish God and Demon World novel was. There’s no hyper nationalism, r@pe or misogyny. Grammar is excellent, plot is great, characters are fleshed out, a nice number of chapters already out and seems to have a good pace of new chapter turn out. Highly highly recommended
One of the most relatable main character that i have seen in a non-romance novels. very realistic emotion and character development for a survival novel. and by this i don't mean that the story falls short in other aspects. one of the few survival/zombie novel that i have enjoyed. if anyone likes this genre i seriously recommend this novel.
Well, i clicked this book for apocalypse and game element. So far, it's great although it will be nice if the mc interacts with players and toy with them. XD Would be cool to see that. But yeah, it has a great story idea and will be staying to see as it progresses! So noo******, have i typed 140 characters? Hmm, don't know. Just writing more just in case haven't reach. Anyways, it would be cool to have a lottery option. Btw, is this going to be a harem? Hopefully not but if it does, i just see how it goes.
Genres: Apocalypse Light-Romance Harem Death of Loved Ones System GameElements Zombies Elves & Magic Side note: No friends for the mc which i love, makes me feel free from stupidity. The novel is honestly good, its worth the shot to read, might be a bit slow first few chappies but the pace catches up with interesting development. This is probably harem but it doesnt have anything similar to his little brother going to her cave to explore heaven or any of that stuff as far as i know, dont get me wrong though, this probably ranks #2 on my list for character development, pretty satisfying. Those looking for R17/18 this isnt it, go watch videos instead. He doesn’t save anyone he sees or everyone. People die in this novel, friends and family. Which is refreshing since its actually pretty much impossible to actually save anyone when your nothing like other stupid novels with brain dead plots *wink*wink* When he gets strong he doesnt win with a one punch bull**** or gets overly strong which is unique on its own way. It also doesnt waste 2-3 chapters on 1 fight like some popular novels that does rinse and repeat. The Author is also humorous on several occasions. *Gives an extra 🍪 * This novel is my baby honestly, a treasure on its own right. Will keep following this and support it if i can.
The beginning first 3-5 chapters in my opinion was a little over the top and hard to read in my opinion but I'm getting tired of that type of thing in stories so some people might like it...the rest of the story is amazing I really love what you're doing and I know it's hard showing trama and the healing process but I have to say you're doing an amazing job and to keep up the good work
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I love this story. The characters and the world design that the author made is really interesting and makes the reader want to keep reading. In my opinion this story deserves a 10/10
Absolutely awesome apocalypse novel it's gone in a Direction I never expected keep me on the edge couldn't put it down to read other updates just overall a fantastic novel I love how the MC been developed throughout the story with a logical conclusions of emotional trauma
Very good novel. Thoughtful world and system. Not badly written images of MC. History slowed down a bit after the city. But it seemed to start to grow again. Of the minus the lengthy and boring chapters about the world of the "immortal"(players).
I don't know why this novel so low on rankings. Maybe because of dark themes but so far it was a good novel and a good read and I like development. Goodluck author!
I personally enjoy this as it appeals to the dark overtones of revenge, the main character trying to keep his ever so waning humanity, and his partial blips of insanity
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its a nice novel, nice history, its dark, very dark it should be +18, i feel sorry for the MC, amazing development too ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I can't write reviews, because I am introvert. So I can only say that the novel is enjoyable to read. I am missing 140 characters. I am missing 140 characters
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Honestly the writing quality is great but personally the story is just way too dark for me. i was enjoying the Novel quite a bit at the start but a soon as Ella was introduced into the story it went full on cannibalism down to the minute details of savoring a the flavor of a living person. The author may need to seek mental treatment.
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Great story, lots of fun, bit brutal which makes it more captivating, each character introduced gets their moment to shine, world building was great and done in some entertaining ways, would recommend.
Sigh to be honest this one of best apocalypse novel I had ever read and apocalypse is my favourite genre. Sadly author not appreciate work much....its had been hiatus for too long. Hope author change his mind
Protagonist run from asylum, story lacks interesting scenario, making yourself feel disgusting with all this crunch and munch..............
One of the best novels I've read in a while the author is on hiatus now but promises to make a triumphant return(hopefully), I'm just looking forward to future updates.
good setup, trash MC, basically all there is to it, no worth in reading unless you want a coward, idiotic, overly emotional about everything MC that almost gets himself killed but only survives thanks to plot armour.
I love the story but I feel like it’s unnecessary to add Ella even if she my fav character but other than that I don’t have much complains except they should add more chapters
Right so here we go 1:writing quality Every(most) chapter has mistakes with grammar this would honestly be alright and you probably wont notice if you read quickly but whats ticks me off is that the mistakes repeat,now the author sounds like a nice person so as a dude who likes this novel I wanna tell em to reread the chapter's before hosting them.3 out of 5 stars 2:stability of Updates Cant help much here (just caught up)(I'll keep at 5 stars until I got more info on here) 3:story development Smooth,sometimes I feel its a bit too fast,plot twists are a bit predictable some times not but otherwise alright story development.4 out of 5 stars 4:character design Now I can tell author puts a lot of time on making sure everything a character is plausible and yeah honestly most of the time mc sounds like a person,its refreshing to see better character design than most crap novels on here,but sometimes mc does stupid things.theres a fight at the end of volume 1 where I feel mc got protected by plot armour,and mc is a but broken but everything is in the realm of possibility.also I like that the names are not confusing and I can keep track of who is who. a rough 4 out of 5 stars 5:world background Its Described beautifully easy 5 out of 5 stars
Awesome dark apocalypse novel with good story and mc progression. The system is not over used but still shows the mc having a good growth rate. Good action and portrayal of emotions. Only criticism would be the jumping back and forth of POVs mid way to show a bunch of “trailers” which drags on for a while.
Keep up the great work. Please don't drop the story. I still can't believe how many different elements got put in the story. It was a bit confusing at first because after a while you as the reader get thrown down the rabbit hole. Then from there its like being put on a never ending rollercoaster.
I've read all these chapters within one day because I couldn't put the phone down. It's addictive to read the story. Sorry no spoilers from me read it for yourself.
Nice story, but the problem is you didn't put whose POV I'm reading and I'm confused at first but I'm used to it by now but please put who's POV I'm reading at the top and I'm also confused about Vol 3 Idk why but I'm lost and Idk what is happening.
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The best original novel I’ve come across in the apocalypse genre. There are game elements and the undead. A really likable/relatable main character. There is some gore and heavy stuff but not gratuitous. This is sort of like what I wish God and Demon World novel was. There’s no hyper nationalism, r@pe or misogyny. Grammar is excellent, plot is great, characters are fleshed out, a nice number of chapters already out and seems to have a good pace of new chapter turn out. Highly highly recommended
One of the most relatable main character that i have seen in a non-romance novels. very realistic emotion and character development for a survival novel. and by this i don't mean that the story falls short in other aspects. one of the few survival/zombie novel that i have enjoyed. if anyone likes this genre i seriously recommend this novel.
Well, i clicked this book for apocalypse and game element. So far, it's great although it will be nice if the mc interacts with players and toy with them. XD Would be cool to see that. But yeah, it has a great story idea and will be staying to see as it progresses! So noo******, have i typed 140 characters? Hmm, don't know. Just writing more just in case haven't reach. Anyways, it would be cool to have a lottery option. Btw, is this going to be a harem? Hopefully not but if it does, i just see how it goes.
Genres: Apocalypse Light-Romance Harem Death of Loved Ones System GameElements Zombies Elves & Magic Side note: No friends for the mc which i love, makes me feel free from stupidity. The novel is honestly good, its worth the shot to read, might be a bit slow first few chappies but the pace catches up with interesting development. This is probably harem but it doesnt have anything similar to his little brother going to her cave to explore heaven or any of that stuff as far as i know, dont get me wrong though, this probably ranks #2 on my list for character development, pretty satisfying. Those looking for R17/18 this isnt it, go watch videos instead. He doesn’t save anyone he sees or everyone. People die in this novel, friends and family. Which is refreshing since its actually pretty much impossible to actually save anyone when your nothing like other stupid novels with brain dead plots *wink*wink* When he gets strong he doesnt win with a one punch bull**** or gets overly strong which is unique on its own way. It also doesnt waste 2-3 chapters on 1 fight like some popular novels that does rinse and repeat. The Author is also humorous on several occasions. *Gives an extra 🍪 * This novel is my baby honestly, a treasure on its own right. Will keep following this and support it if i can.
The beginning first 3-5 chapters in my opinion was a little over the top and hard to read in my opinion but I'm getting tired of that type of thing in stories so some people might like it...the rest of the story is amazing I really love what you're doing and I know it's hard showing trama and the healing process but I have to say you're doing an amazing job and to keep up the good work
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I love this story. The characters and the world design that the author made is really interesting and makes the reader want to keep reading. In my opinion this story deserves a 10/10
Absolutely awesome apocalypse novel it's gone in a Direction I never expected keep me on the edge couldn't put it down to read other updates just overall a fantastic novel I love how the MC been developed throughout the story with a logical conclusions of emotional trauma
Very good novel. Thoughtful world and system. Not badly written images of MC. History slowed down a bit after the city. But it seemed to start to grow again. Of the minus the lengthy and boring chapters about the world of the "immortal"(players).
I don't know why this novel so low on rankings. Maybe because of dark themes but so far it was a good novel and a good read and I like development. Goodluck author!
I personally enjoy this as it appeals to the dark overtones of revenge, the main character trying to keep his ever so waning humanity, and his partial blips of insanity
揭示劇透 its a nice novel, nice history, its dark, very dark it should be +18, i feel sorry for the MC, amazing development too ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I can't write reviews, because I am introvert. So I can only say that the novel is enjoyable to read. I am missing 140 characters. I am missing 140 characters
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