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Great start... One of the major drawbacks is that the chapters are too short and they are not as exhaustive as they should be. I encourage the author to release more detailed and lengthy chapters.
Great start... One of the major drawbacks is that the chapters are too short and they are not as exhaustive as they should be. I encourage the author to release more detailed and lengthy chapters.