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Liked this novel allllooot the plotline is pretty generic but it has been done really well, unfortunately it seems as if the author has passed away. Rest in peace.
Where did this writter go? I sure hope he or she is fine and doing well. I sure do enjoy the write up, infact great work in every regard. Further more i love how the story is unfolding with various mysteries and power play
Author, please release another chapter, it has been weeks since the last chapter, and i really enjoyed the story line, it showed the level of research and dedication to detail
I have really enjoyed the story. Picturing myself as Gerald. So many things to learn in terms of strategy even at the work place. Can't wait to read more from you
Really liked the story, it is sad to ser it left abandoned and that tere were no updates for the last 2 years. I read it all in a day or two and couldn’t wait for more, sadly it only has 87 chapter….
This story is beautifully crafted, and would survive for years, if the author is alive please do continue but if not then I hope you look down on earth with a smile, because you're a talented writer.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Interesting to motivate anyone who wish to start life all over again and mostly quite readerble even to the lame man My only worry is just that the story seems not fully completed and that all researching should be hasten to prove how one needs to stand up even against all odds of lif
I really love this novel. The author has a very creative imagination, which he brings alive in the characters and setting. The power play and twists fantastic; blood, revenge, love, loyalty, family come alive. The novel puts you on edge, drawn, committed. And what's more, it's fantastically realistic.
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Excellent plot, excellent grammar. Vivid use of words. Graphic presentation of scenery, situations and emotions. The depth and maturity of the author is obvious.
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It stopped updating for a year now.... What happened to the author? No announcement at all. I hope the author would start writing again. Such a shame. This is one of the best Webnovel I’ve read atm.
Characters are fleshed out nicely. Politics and schemes are well thought out and written. Overall probably one of the better paced and thought out novels on this site.
Still waiting for a ne chapter............................................................. ..........................................................................
Hope that this story will resume for soooooon and fast like fast and furious. It was really really good and was sad when it was dropped. Hope that the author continues it
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Still waiting please update us what is happening Please. ..............................................................................................
Still waiting author so please come back 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
FRICKIN AWESOME... if you don't like unnecessary escaping enemy than this is for you Love you author 😘.... No homo tho 😉
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Liked this novel allllooot the plotline is pretty generic but it has been done really well, unfortunately it seems as if the author has passed away. Rest in peace.
Where did this writter go? I sure hope he or she is fine and doing well. I sure do enjoy the write up, infact great work in every regard. Further more i love how the story is unfolding with various mysteries and power play
Author, please release another chapter, it has been weeks since the last chapter, and i really enjoyed the story line, it showed the level of research and dedication to detail
I have really enjoyed the story. Picturing myself as Gerald. So many things to learn in terms of strategy even at the work place. Can't wait to read more from you
Really liked the story, it is sad to ser it left abandoned and that tere were no updates for the last 2 years. I read it all in a day or two and couldn’t wait for more, sadly it only has 87 chapter….
This story is beautifully crafted, and would survive for years, if the author is alive please do continue but if not then I hope you look down on earth with a smile, because you're a talented writer.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Interesting to motivate anyone who wish to start life all over again and mostly quite readerble even to the lame man My only worry is just that the story seems not fully completed and that all researching should be hasten to prove how one needs to stand up even against all odds of lif
I really love this novel. The author has a very creative imagination, which he brings alive in the characters and setting. The power play and twists fantastic; blood, revenge, love, loyalty, family come alive. The novel puts you on edge, drawn, committed. And what's more, it's fantastically realistic.
揭示劇透 Excellent plot, excellent grammar. Vivid use of words. Graphic presentation of scenery, situations and emotions. The depth and maturity of the author is obvious.
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It stopped updating for a year now.... What happened to the author? No announcement at all. I hope the author would start writing again. Such a shame. This is one of the best Webnovel I’ve read atm.
Characters are fleshed out nicely. Politics and schemes are well thought out and written. Overall probably one of the better paced and thought out novels on this site.
Still waiting for a ne chapter............................................................. ..........................................................................
Hope that this story will resume for soooooon and fast like fast and furious. It was really really good and was sad when it was dropped. Hope that the author continues it
...............................Please still waiting............................. ..............................................................................................
Still waiting please update us what is happening Please. ..............................................................................................
Still waiting author so please come back 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
FRICKIN AWESOME... if you don't like unnecessary escaping enemy than this is for you Love you author 😘.... No homo tho 😉
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are you still alive? its been fice years your story was very interresting