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really good, a female mc in the world of one piece I really hope you do not stop this story I will surely follow your book actively! I look forward to the continuation. character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140
even for a fan fic, your idea of the story is pretty original. the fact the mc isnt from the modern/reincarnated is a big surprise at least what i can tell from the first chapter. and the second is the fact that she is a chick is even more surprising. The majority of female MCs just fail to live up or surpass the awesomeness of a male MC. hate sounding ***ist but its just plain true which is why there are not alot of female wuxia novels. well there are quite of them but im just not been a fan of a female MC. im delighted to see how far you plan going with this. i really hope her rivals/enemies will be different from luffys. whats gonna help you in this story is the fact she has no knowledge about events that will happen in luffys journey. A native female MC from the same one piece world... im looking forward to your future chapters.
A different twist of One piece, quite a nice story, and fun to read hoping the update will be fast and the author won't drop the story. A female MC whereas, she is not a reincarnated but a different POV of a protagonist in the golden age of piracy. Just read it is nice.
really good, a female mc in the world of one piece I really hope you do not stop this story I will surely follow your book actively! I look forward to the continuation. character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140
even for a fan fic, your idea of the story is pretty original. the fact the mc isnt from the modern/reincarnated is a big surprise at least what i can tell from the first chapter. and the second is the fact that she is a chick is even more surprising. The majority of female MCs just fail to live up or surpass the awesomeness of a male MC. hate sounding ***ist but its just plain true which is why there are not alot of female wuxia novels. well there are quite of them but im just not been a fan of a female MC. im delighted to see how far you plan going with this. i really hope her rivals/enemies will be different from luffys. whats gonna help you in this story is the fact she has no knowledge about events that will happen in luffys journey. A native female MC from the same one piece world... im looking forward to your future chapters.
A different twist of One piece, quite a nice story, and fun to read hoping the update will be fast and the author won't drop the story. A female MC whereas, she is not a reincarnated but a different POV of a protagonist in the golden age of piracy. Just read it is nice.