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For all new incoming reader this is my first ever work i've ever started so i hope you give me a chance and help me by showing me what i can do do better on and what i should correct. Plus i know my first chapter isn't the greatest but i hope you guys keep on reading cause i know that future chapters will be a lot better. And about my book cover. I know it's terrible and i made it myself so if there are any kind Samaritans out there that would make a cover for me out of the kindness of their heart that would be grateful
For all new incoming reader this is my first ever work i've ever started so i hope you give me a chance and help me by showing me what i can do do better on and what i should correct. Plus i know my first chapter isn't the greatest but i hope you guys keep on reading cause i know that future chapters will be a lot better. And about my book cover. I know it's terrible and i made it myself so if there are any kind Samaritans out there that would make a cover for me out of the kindness of their heart that would be grateful