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I actually find the author's comments on chaps at Trial Marriage so entertaining that I got curious on checking the profile so I decided to check on his works. The synopsis of this story made me add this novel to my library! Only high expectations for this.
The tittle was a bit intriguing and it captivates my attention to read it when I have time . But for the time being I'm busy spending my SS to one story, this was the story next to my reading target
The tittle was a bit intriguing and it captivates my attention to read it when I have time . But for the time being I'm busy spending my SS to one story, this was the story next to my reading target
I've used Web novel for quite some time now and trust me I've read a lot of books .. most get interesting and they stop updating but this book here is completely different . Love everything about it.
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Looking forward to start reading this novel comments shows it will be a great one too. Will try and join the fans soon😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘🤩😍🤗🙂😎☺️😚☺️😎😍😘🤩🤗🙂😃😃😎🤗🤗😍😍🙂🙂😎🤗🤗🙂😎😍🤗🤗
Another Dose: “You had to deal every day with people who were foolish and lazy and untruthful and downright unpleasant, and you could certainly end up thinking that the world would be considerably improved if you gave them a slap.” ― Terry Pratchett, Wintersmith
Daily Dose: “I've never slapped anyone before,” she admitted. “How did you find the experience?” “It would have been more satisfying if he'd gone flying out of his seat like I imagined.” ― Alexandra Bracken, Passenger
Daily Doses: Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance
Please update more! Waiting...waiting...waiting.... it's keeping us on our toes! Thanks for the chapters! Time travels and monsters await! Update, update.....
Have I managed to balance the reviews? 🤔 "A review should be no more than 140 characters." Why is this so? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 What if you don't want to write a whole paragraph??
"A review should be no more than 140 characters." Why is this so? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 What if you don't want to write a whole paragraph??
揭示劇透 "A review should be no more than 140 characters." Why is this so? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 What if you don't want to write a whole paragraph??
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The updates were here and I enjoyed it so much that I couldn't help writing another review. Great story plot, great character designs, great world background, and has the necessary amount of comedy material. What more can we ask? Just a good stability of updates. But the author chan also got her life so I want to say to the author that keep the quality up, keep doing what you already are, I LOVE THIS STORY. Give us a mass release in the future though (can't help being a little demanding~)
Amazing story. Great Grammer. Very fluid. Writing 5/5. Story development 5/5 10/10 would recommend. 👏🏾👏🏾 💀💀🤣🤣 Shameless author and I'm proud 🤷🏾♀️
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揭示劇透 I love this. This story definitely deserves more votes!!! Not too light which is just perfect when we want to read something new and different from normal romance stories. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
The story line is great! I get a bit lost on which characters is speaking. Continue i would like to know more. The character are very interesting.
giving you five stars even before i read, I see you everywhere on all of my favorite webnovels and you always get top comment because you are always so funny
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters.* Constructive Criticism: Honestly, I can't even think of anything you did poorly. Positive Feedback: I don't even know where to begin.;,;. Personal Feedback: Though I feel you did a really good job on this novel, it is not really my cup of tea.;,;. I have already removed it from my library. Please don't feel downhearted by this, I feel that you will obtain and keep a large fan base with this, so keep up the good work.;,;.
I love it. Has me laughing my behind off and it's well written. 10/10 would recommend. Hopefully, the writer won't drop it. ..........................................................................
You got me hooked right from the start! It's hilarious to read and well written.If you can continuously write like this, then I'll be very happy.
5 stars. That's it. That's the review. ***** jcbdkcjdskfjbifkbdcixbcxkhcbsdifbsdfidskjfbsdfjdsfsdfbsdfjbsdfjdfisdgbfisdfbsdifbsdihfbsdifbsdihfbsdifbsdifbsdoiufhsdiufbsdfsdf 140 characters
This fan fic is one of those unique ones. So far it's good. I recommend you all to read it. Worth it. ------------ 140 char ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is the quality content I expect from RTW Fanfiction Contest, keep up the good work! ....... ....... ....... ........ ......... 140 chars.
An interesting fan-fic I've read so far. The plots and development of the characters were one of a kind. It gave a uniqueness to the story. You came up with a specific characters that others usually didn't. Other fan-fic I've read, they just follow the personality of characters and story lines from the original story, so it made a very limited changes of their fan-fic and less interesting. However, your fan-fic story gave a feeling of freshness.
I read the the first two chapters and I must say that I am impressed. I love the author's writing style and I must say that this story is quite hilarious. It's a must read.
So far so good I'm excited to see how this plot continues!!! The story is reminiscent of the Salem Witch Trials, which I LOVE!!! lol but Author you may want to change this from general audiences 😂
So far I’m interested in seeing how this plot continues. The ending of the first chapter had me laughing 😂. It’s different from what I usually read, but that’s what makes it more appealing to me. Looking forward to more chapters 👍
I'm the author of this novel and this is my entry for Release That Witch Contest. I shamelessly gave myself five stars. Feel free to critique from the bottom your crot- heart. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I actually find the author's comments on chaps at Trial Marriage so entertaining that I got curious on checking the profile so I decided to check on his works. The synopsis of this story made me add this novel to my library! Only high expectations for this.
The tittle was a bit intriguing and it captivates my attention to read it when I have time . But for the time being I'm busy spending my SS to one story, this was the story next to my reading target
The tittle was a bit intriguing and it captivates my attention to read it when I have time . But for the time being I'm busy spending my SS to one story, this was the story next to my reading target
I've used Web novel for quite some time now and trust me I've read a lot of books .. most get interesting and they stop updating but this book here is completely different . Love everything about it.
I’m not so good with reviews so I’ll use heart emojis to support ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Looking forward to start reading this novel comments shows it will be a great one too. Will try and join the fans soon😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘🤩😍🤗🙂😎☺️😚☺️😎😍😘🤩🤗🙂😃😃😎🤗🤗😍😍🙂🙂😎🤗🤗🙂😎😍🤗🤗
Another Dose: “You had to deal every day with people who were foolish and lazy and untruthful and downright unpleasant, and you could certainly end up thinking that the world would be considerably improved if you gave them a slap.” ― Terry Pratchett, Wintersmith
Daily Dose: “I've never slapped anyone before,” she admitted. “How did you find the experience?” “It would have been more satisfying if he'd gone flying out of his seat like I imagined.” ― Alexandra Bracken, Passenger
Daily Doses: Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance Life is all about balance
Please update more! Waiting...waiting...waiting.... it's keeping us on our toes! Thanks for the chapters! Time travels and monsters await! Update, update.....
Have I managed to balance the reviews? 🤔 "A review should be no more than 140 characters." Why is this so? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 What if you don't want to write a whole paragraph??
"A review should be no more than 140 characters." Why is this so? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 What if you don't want to write a whole paragraph??
揭示劇透 "A review should be no more than 140 characters." Why is this so? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 What if you don't want to write a whole paragraph??
揭示劇透 The updates were here and I enjoyed it so much that I couldn't help writing another review. Great story plot, great character designs, great world background, and has the necessary amount of comedy material. What more can we ask? Just a good stability of updates. But the author chan also got her life so I want to say to the author that keep the quality up, keep doing what you already are, I LOVE THIS STORY. Give us a mass release in the future though (can't help being a little demanding~)
Amazing story. Great Grammer. Very fluid. Writing 5/5. Story development 5/5 10/10 would recommend. 👏🏾👏🏾 💀💀🤣🤣 Shameless author and I'm proud 🤷🏾♀️
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揭示劇透 I love this. This story definitely deserves more votes!!! Not too light which is just perfect when we want to read something new and different from normal romance stories. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
The story line is great! I get a bit lost on which characters is speaking. Continue i would like to know more. The character are very interesting.
giving you five stars even before i read, I see you everywhere on all of my favorite webnovels and you always get top comment because you are always so funny
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters.* Constructive Criticism: Honestly, I can't even think of anything you did poorly. Positive Feedback: I don't even know where to begin.;,;. Personal Feedback: Though I feel you did a really good job on this novel, it is not really my cup of tea.;,;. I have already removed it from my library. Please don't feel downhearted by this, I feel that you will obtain and keep a large fan base with this, so keep up the good work.;,;.
I love it. Has me laughing my behind off and it's well written. 10/10 would recommend. Hopefully, the writer won't drop it. ..........................................................................
You got me hooked right from the start! It's hilarious to read and well written.If you can continuously write like this, then I'll be very happy.
5 stars. That's it. That's the review. ***** jcbdkcjdskfjbifkbdcixbcxkhcbsdifbsdfidskjfbsdfjdsfsdfbsdfjbsdfjdfisdgbfisdfbsdifbsdihfbsdifbsdihfbsdifbsdifbsdoiufhsdiufbsdfsdf 140 characters
This fan fic is one of those unique ones. So far it's good. I recommend you all to read it. Worth it. ------------ 140 char ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is the quality content I expect from RTW Fanfiction Contest, keep up the good work! ....... ....... ....... ........ ......... 140 chars.
An interesting fan-fic I've read so far. The plots and development of the characters were one of a kind. It gave a uniqueness to the story. You came up with a specific characters that others usually didn't. Other fan-fic I've read, they just follow the personality of characters and story lines from the original story, so it made a very limited changes of their fan-fic and less interesting. However, your fan-fic story gave a feeling of freshness.
I read the the first two chapters and I must say that I am impressed. I love the author's writing style and I must say that this story is quite hilarious. It's a must read.
So far so good I'm excited to see how this plot continues!!! The story is reminiscent of the Salem Witch Trials, which I LOVE!!! lol but Author you may want to change this from general audiences 😂
So far I’m interested in seeing how this plot continues. The ending of the first chapter had me laughing 😂. It’s different from what I usually read, but that’s what makes it more appealing to me. Looking forward to more chapters 👍
I'm the author of this novel and this is my entry for Release That Witch Contest. I shamelessly gave myself five stars. Feel free to critique from the bottom your crot- heart. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)