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Within the magical kingdom of Vasilas, every citizen wether they be a commoner or king, servant or soldier are commonly identified with the "trait" linked with their magic alignment. Those with the "honour" trait are often Knights and Nobles, those with "perseverance" are usually farmers and blacksmiths. Persephone Odius, daughter of a famous war-hero of the past enrolled in the magic academy to discover her trait and be a hero like her father... but fate had other plans.
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Very engaging introduction, with a good character development. Effective language has been used, to create a captivating start. Good job, can't wait to read the rest of the novel.
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I m new to this story,so its only a superficial review,which i liked very much (for now). 1-Introduction:an quite awesome one and interesting World and its people still It kinda killed the wonders of Magic and didn't place any logical/scientific(which i liked) And a thing a don't liked much was the "i'll change society Just because It is racista(i don't know another word to say português: preconceito)" not that It was bad stil i think It lacked an Ideology
揭示劇透卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 The Hero's Daughter and the King's Nephew 6 years ago
- 2 The Trait 6 years ago
- 3 The Prodigy 6 years ago
- 4 The Angel 6 years ago
- 5 The Crusader 6 years ago
- 6 The Price of Power 6 years ago
- 7 The Warhound 6 years ago
- 8 The Promise 6 years ago
- 9 The Alternative 6 years ago
- 10 The Alchemist 6 years ago
- 11 The Feelings in their Hearts 6 years ago
- 12 The Experiment 6 years ago
- 13 The Faults of Society 6 years ago
- 14 The Stories told in Silence 6 years ago
- 15 The Calm 6 years ago
- 16 The Storm 6 years ago
- 17 The Crusader's Oath 6 years ago
- 18 The Storm rages on 6 years ago
- 19 The Unyielding Crusader 6 years ago
- 20 The Burden of Hatred 6 years ago
- 21 The Dreamer and the Delusional 6 years ago
- 22 The Reinforcements 6 years ago
- 23 The Duel of the Depraved 6 years ago
- 24 The Aftermath 6 years ago
- 25 The Comforting Angel 6 years ago
I will with the best of my ability try to release 1 chapter per day. If anybody has any feedback they want to share please leave it the comments as I'm very eager to improve my writing. Also give a reply to this review (or just send me message anywhere really) if you want me to post auxiliary character sheets for the main characters.