2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
LV 1
Till now these chapter shows excellent world + story + lot+character but there is some low quality writing that i think will change with due time i have read your other books and they seem fine so this would in turn out to be okay.
LV 1
Updates, NO updates, till now man,,,,,,,..... What should i say................There are not many chap in the first place why. huh................................
LV 1
Till now these chapter shows excellent world + story + lot+character but there is some low quality writing that i think will change with due time i have read your other books and they seem fine so this would in turn out to be okay.
Updates, NO updates, till now man,,,,,,,..... What should i say................There are not many chap in the first place why. huh................................