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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Very interesting story............ Keep it up...we support all the way......................................................................... ...................................please update.............. .........................
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Fantastic book so far looking forward to more updates. the basis so far has been the MC raising the sect of the boy he reincanated/possessed used to belong to.
a very very interesting story, have to wait on how the story progresses, its been a good ride so far! i need 140 chr. soo here's how to cook rice for fancy people..psh salt who puts salt in their rice Follow These Steps Boil water and add salt Pour water (for every cup of rice, use 1¾ cups of water) into a large saucepan with a tight-fitting lid. Bring to a boil. Mix 1 teaspoon salt into the water. Pour in rice Add it to the boiling water. Stir once, or just enough to separate the rice Use a wooden spoon to separate any clum**. Don’t over-stir: That can cause the rice to become sticky. Cover the pot and simmer Be sure the lid fits tightly on the pot. Turn down the heat to its lowest setting. Let rice simmer for about 18 minutes, then remove from heat and allow the rice to steam in the pot for another 5 minutes. Fluff rice with a fork Just before serving, gently fluff the rice with a fork to separate the grains.
I'm starting to like this novel now if there are fast stable updates that would be noce. Keep up the good work 🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
This looks to be an interesting story! There are a few minor editing issues, but other than that the writing quality is pretty good. The story is very promising. I can't wait to see how things develop!
I know this might be early(more like very early) I like the concept and what to encourage the author to continue, also I would like if you can add romance like1-4 women(anymore would be to much) and make him op but subtly op, give his family some type of inheritance like soul swords that at every family member gains from the use of the Manuel then after some generations it becomes a bloodline thing changing their constitutions.just my suggestions, won't affect my opinion of the story so keep up
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Very interesting story............ Keep it up...we support all the way......................................................................... ...................................please update.............. .........................
揭示劇透 Fantastic book so far looking forward to more updates. the basis so far has been the MC raising the sect of the boy he reincanated/possessed used to belong to.
a very very interesting story, have to wait on how the story progresses, its been a good ride so far! i need 140 chr. soo here's how to cook rice for fancy people..psh salt who puts salt in their rice Follow These Steps Boil water and add salt Pour water (for every cup of rice, use 1¾ cups of water) into a large saucepan with a tight-fitting lid. Bring to a boil. Mix 1 teaspoon salt into the water. Pour in rice Add it to the boiling water. Stir once, or just enough to separate the rice Use a wooden spoon to separate any clum**. Don’t over-stir: That can cause the rice to become sticky. Cover the pot and simmer Be sure the lid fits tightly on the pot. Turn down the heat to its lowest setting. Let rice simmer for about 18 minutes, then remove from heat and allow the rice to steam in the pot for another 5 minutes. Fluff rice with a fork Just before serving, gently fluff the rice with a fork to separate the grains.
I'm starting to like this novel now if there are fast stable updates that would be noce. Keep up the good work 🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙍🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
This looks to be an interesting story! There are a few minor editing issues, but other than that the writing quality is pretty good. The story is very promising. I can't wait to see how things develop!
I know this might be early(more like very early) I like the concept and what to encourage the author to continue, also I would like if you can add romance like1-4 women(anymore would be to much) and make him op but subtly op, give his family some type of inheritance like soul swords that at every family member gains from the use of the Manuel then after some generations it becomes a bloodline thing changing their constitutions.just my suggestions, won't affect my opinion of the story so keep up
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!