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It was a very interesting and immersive story intensive and all round nice except for the last part that seems a little incomplete or inconclusive
I love the novel so far please I need more.. All my stones will go for this one.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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I so much love the story and it settings it make sense on the kind of personality I do cherish and I hope the next seasons won't cost much and am urging the author to at least make it to be 4coins or 5coins to unlock per chapter ,that is if the author wants to lock his novels.......thank you and I hope the novel will be posted for free reading...thanks.
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Great story... But His master is not truly trying to kill him. Probably doesn't believe he can be killed. I recommend it.. But it needs a little editing.
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Hmmm its really good and interesting story i read the synopsis its my first story in original section it's pretty cool theme thanks author for this.
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writing quality is decent and 2 chapters a days is satisfactory and story development is great in my opinion even tho the mc is op but it has some touches of comedy and action as the mc gets more powerful.Many of you ppl might think like meh this is boring like other novels but it gets better umm I don't expect anything like romance but I know there will be soon and it reminds me of godeater anime lol and the mc is kinda dense and mature at the same I guess as his master gets frustrated while keeping the mc as his disciple and actually I don't wanna giveaway much spoilers just hinting stuff also idk man I might cry if this novel gets dull like other novels as the story progress more.Also the world background is already full of mystery having 9 realms stuff like that. Overall This novel is good atleast try reading 15 chapters I am sure you will like it.Since i am here all for the comedy and action like AWE or issth...
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The style is great but the whole content needs serious editing. The development and evolution of this work is seriously amazing and the backdrop world is to be craved for. In short, it is a great work just put out a little carelessly at certain places.
Sorely underrated novel, while there are mistakes in the writing it is a addicting story (much like his other work Lucy Wickshire which unfortunately isn't on this site anymore). And yes, the protag's master tries to kill him but it's for his own good! Read on for an adventure you probably haven't seen.
Finally, I have made time. This book is now my primary book and takes priority over the other. My regular release is now two chapters a day post. Thanks for reading. Tell me what you think.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
It was a very interesting and immersive story intensive and all round nice except for the last part that seems a little incomplete or inconclusive
I love the novel so far please I need more.. All my stones will go for this one.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
揭示劇透 I so much love the story and it settings it make sense on the kind of personality I do cherish and I hope the next seasons won't cost much and am urging the author to at least make it to be 4coins or 5coins to unlock per chapter ,that is if the author wants to lock his novels.......thank you and I hope the novel will be posted for free reading...thanks.
Rt now now I KB cf u want me and you have to be a I'm yjjbf nmn up to be a lot of the same here for the same here for the same here for the same here for the same here for the same here for
Great story... But His master is not truly trying to kill him. Probably doesn't believe he can be killed. I recommend it.. But it needs a little editing.
iooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Hmmm its really good and interesting story i read the synopsis its my first story in original section it's pretty cool theme thanks author for this.
Nenebebebehhejfkvmnqbsgyvygu d g enjejvi h h h h h hadccv h h h j j u. T da d g h j kk k j. Bhxhshshdhdhdbdbbdbsndb h be Book makes me happy.
writing quality is decent and 2 chapters a days is satisfactory and story development is great in my opinion even tho the mc is op but it has some touches of comedy and action as the mc gets more powerful.Many of you ppl might think like meh this is boring like other novels but it gets better umm I don't expect anything like romance but I know there will be soon and it reminds me of godeater anime lol and the mc is kinda dense and mature at the same I guess as his master gets frustrated while keeping the mc as his disciple and actually I don't wanna giveaway much spoilers just hinting stuff also idk man I might cry if this novel gets dull like other novels as the story progress more.Also the world background is already full of mystery having 9 realms stuff like that. Overall This novel is good atleast try reading 15 chapters I am sure you will like it.Since i am here all for the comedy and action like AWE or issth...
揭示劇透 The style is great but the whole content needs serious editing. The development and evolution of this work is seriously amazing and the backdrop world is to be craved for. In short, it is a great work just put out a little carelessly at certain places.
Sorely underrated novel, while there are mistakes in the writing it is a addicting story (much like his other work Lucy Wickshire which unfortunately isn't on this site anymore). And yes, the protag's master tries to kill him but it's for his own good! Read on for an adventure you probably haven't seen.
Finally, I have made time. This book is now my primary book and takes priority over the other. My regular release is now two chapters a day post. Thanks for reading. Tell me what you think.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!