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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. good story
Nice start...................................................................................................................................,,...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
BuenooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooMe gusta mucho pero esperaré más capítulos para una revisión más seria.No entiendo engles mucho pero me gusta.
Buenoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.Me gusta mucho pero esperaré más capítulos para una revisión más seria. No entiendo engles mucho pero me gusta.
È UNA MERDA XDXDXD LOL IN REALTÀ STO FACENDO UN FAVORE ALL'AUTORE PERCHÈ NON ME NE FREGA UN CAZZO DEI LIBRI E IO LO CONOSCO LUI È QUINDI BHO LOL
I like the dragon. Yep 5 stars for the dragon. Now some facts about the Black Plague: The third plague pandemic (1855–1859) started in China in the mid-19th century, spreading to all inhabited continents and killing 10 million people in India alone.
I just read it and it's good. There are almost no mistakes - I could find only 2 or 3 - but it doesn't affect the story at all, it's easy to understand what the author is saying. But.....there are only 3 chapters (28/05/2018)!! This rating is an encouragement to write more!
sou viciado vou esperar sair o 10 capitulo pra ler.................................................................................................................................................
I'll give it a try , looks intresting just hope that you don't drop it because of negative reviews or people asking for more chapters like the Author of Cultivation god did..
I’m reading the synopsis and I’m confuse how he would get 7 souls I know that it says he reincarnated 7 times. But if he reincarnated 7 times shouldn’t it be just one soul with 7 different personality? I guess I’ll have to dig in.
Very interesting start. I want to read more chapters! The only thing I would improve on are some minor grammatical mistakes. Other than that, it is well written.
I'm the author so my opinion doesn't count. But you should give this story a chance, is really not bad. At the moment there aren't many chapters and the release speed isn't the best but I promise I'll try harder. If you don't understand something, feel free to ask me, I'll answer unless it's a spoiler or something that will be explained later in the story. My thick skin is almost running out so I shall end my shameless review here. Bye, hope you'll enjoy it!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. good story
Nice start...................................................................................................................................,,...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
BuenooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooMe gusta mucho pero esperaré más capítulos para una revisión más seria.No entiendo engles mucho pero me gusta.
Buenoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.Me gusta mucho pero esperaré más capítulos para una revisión más seria. No entiendo engles mucho pero me gusta.
È UNA MERDA XDXDXD LOL IN REALTÀ STO FACENDO UN FAVORE ALL'AUTORE PERCHÈ NON ME NE FREGA UN CAZZO DEI LIBRI E IO LO CONOSCO LUI È QUINDI BHO LOL
I like the dragon. Yep 5 stars for the dragon. Now some facts about the Black Plague: The third plague pandemic (1855–1859) started in China in the mid-19th century, spreading to all inhabited continents and killing 10 million people in India alone.
I just read it and it's good. There are almost no mistakes - I could find only 2 or 3 - but it doesn't affect the story at all, it's easy to understand what the author is saying. But.....there are only 3 chapters (28/05/2018)!! This rating is an encouragement to write more!
sou viciado vou esperar sair o 10 capitulo pra ler.................................................................................................................................................
I'll give it a try , looks intresting just hope that you don't drop it because of negative reviews or people asking for more chapters like the Author of Cultivation god did..
I’m reading the synopsis and I’m confuse how he would get 7 souls I know that it says he reincarnated 7 times. But if he reincarnated 7 times shouldn’t it be just one soul with 7 different personality? I guess I’ll have to dig in.
Very interesting start. I want to read more chapters! The only thing I would improve on are some minor grammatical mistakes. Other than that, it is well written.
I'm the author so my opinion doesn't count. But you should give this story a chance, is really not bad. At the moment there aren't many chapters and the release speed isn't the best but I promise I'll try harder. If you don't understand something, feel free to ask me, I'll answer unless it's a spoiler or something that will be explained later in the story. My thick skin is almost running out so I shall end my shameless review here. Bye, hope you'll enjoy it!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.