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I low key think I read this on a another website past this she had already opened up the key for her husband key are you the same author like.??
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good stuff very.. good I like where this is going please more very good story very good trash talking please keep going very very good .. good good good
I don’t know why, although I’ve kind of like the story but it just eludes me somewhat.. maybe if it has several more chapters that I can surely understand the story line and perhaps get hooked on reading.. right now.. it’s stuck at the current page.
The plot seems interesting and I'm looking forward to see what Xael will do to be back with her hubby. Can't wait to see future interactions between the two of them!!
Great story!!! The characters are so wonderful you just want to keep reading on. I hope they publish more chapters soon. One great story.
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I low key think I read this on a another website past this she had already opened up the key for her husband key are you the same author like.??
揭示劇透 good stuff very.. good I like where this is going please more very good story very good trash talking please keep going very very good .. good good good
I don’t know why, although I’ve kind of like the story but it just eludes me somewhat.. maybe if it has several more chapters that I can surely understand the story line and perhaps get hooked on reading.. right now.. it’s stuck at the current page.
The plot seems interesting and I'm looking forward to see what Xael will do to be back with her hubby. Can't wait to see future interactions between the two of them!!
Great story!!! The characters are so wonderful you just want to keep reading on. I hope they publish more chapters soon. One great story.
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