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I LOVED IT!!! Hope in the future we might hear more of the Sun Kingdom, but I'm already crying from this beautiful ending explanation. The shameless MC was great and the kingdom-building was well explained and interesting to read. I always had the feeling of "what's coming next". Although it couldn't be completed, I also really liked how you planned out the story and gave us a satisfying ending. Thanks for writing such a jewel on this website.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Interesting story, much more detailed in the practicalities of development that other novels. Character development was interesting, but MC was cringe. I appreciate the author giving feedback and making note chapters, sad to see it end
I wish it was possible to give this novel more than 5 stars. It is a really good story and I recommend that everyone should read it. It is 100% a comedy, but the good type of comedy that allows a lot of room for story development and leaves plenty of chances for very serious moments. It is a mainly light hearted story so far but you can see how the heaviness is also starting to build up. Overall, it is a very balanced and wonderful story. My recommendation is to drop whatever you are doing and read what has come out so far right away. The chapter releases also seem pretty consistent so far. It has become one of my daily reads.
Bad author for not finishing this book. I feel like crying after reading this. This best novel would have been very famous if you had finished it properly. Very beautiful story. Stupid author....🤬🤬🤬
I need exp the rest is spam. Here's the link below to continue watching the playlist of relaxing soft piano music to the same a computer that will be a room for your time and I'll get the legendary in massive tense good morning I am a little bit of a misanthrope to do it was a temporary server error the system manager and I'll get back to you.
Uma das melhores histórias já escritas nesse site que teve um final completo e todo arrumadinho com um final mais que emocionante, quem um dia ler essa história se a agarra e não vai mais querer soltar , uma ótima ralação de Cris com sua amada Mia, digo e repito um das melhores história que já li.
Haaaaaa i feel this book is dropped because you stop updating if i remember its been 2 month or more than 2 or least haaaa such a schame that i really like the funny way it you write its make me laught like the will eternal haaaa i guess you should know when to stop and to not stop updating but the novel is great
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Gostei muito dessa história, recomendo. A única falta é a demora na postagem de novos capítulos.........................................................................................
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Well.. Good story, kingdom development with comedy. This novel is light for read so far not to much intense plot just casual but i like it, also mc doesn't have superpowers but he has knowledge from modern world.
A really good read that is lighthearted and action packed at the same time! Has some room for improvements but a worthwhile read! World needs some improvement, characters need to evolve a bit more and an early challenge would be nice too
Epic! This story is so good I blew through all the chapters in 6 hours.... I’m hooked, keep up the amazing work. The writer is keeping it fresh on point and clearly progress is being seen without any issues reading, I’ve read hundreds of light novels and this is hands down some of the best work I’ve seen.
The first version was not only silly and fun but often cringy. Author rewrote it and its much better and more balance, world and characters are more consistent. The updates are not ultrafast and this is a good thing. And I can't wait to see the new story catch the 'beta version' and develop further. MC is NOT better, more intelligent, colder and more ''darksasuke'' than the other males of the universe and that is GOOD. The fake ''ruthless but friendly, never sexually interested but with 8 wives'' MC of too many novel is boring past the 50th novel. Plus, he have a migthy, impressive, steed with a very cool name. I hope it will have it's own set of armour someday. :)
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One of those storyline with cute, smart MC surrounded by capable people. I truly enjoy the small incidents around the MC. And the way the author brings in technology, fairytale figures as well as the MC trying his best to chase the lead female character is refreshing. One draw back is the slow update. But it's OK if each chapter is equally exciting. 👏👏👏👏
I like city building games. But still, no wicked human? With quirky king like that, and nobody respect him, there might be someone thirst of power will usurp his throne.
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Keep up the good work 😉 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😅😉😉😉😉😉😅😅😉😉😉
It's a good story that is in my top five books.................................................................................................................
Good comedy, logical kingdom building and tech gap, isekai sim city or banished, but the MC is retard. Medieval women might be more "natural" than pre 80s real world, especially hairy both armpits and down, no way conform to modern beauty standard. So why the MC is so crazy about this kind of woman? Unless he has fetish about this "natural".
Awesome chapters!!!!! But I want more!!!!!!!!!! (｡+･`ω･´) (｡+･`ω･´) (｡+･`ω･´) Btw, author what is the release rate?? Thanks in advance for answering. (I will be really mad if u don't answer)
Im just here to write a review, though Im not reviewing it, I would just say that the Mc is a fresh take, the relationship is built quite good and the story progress consistently and hardly much of contradiction
Author i beg of you to please keep going.—————————————————-11111111111111111111111111———————————————————————1aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
What can I say. I love it. The kingdom building is awesome and the MC is unique. The romance between him and Mia is probably something Chinese novel will never be able to do. It's a small but steady burn, so cute and so very well done.
wonderful story, the world and characters are cerfuly crafted with loads of effort and care, it's a shame it's so short, don't let it fool you you should read it it worth all the time in exchange u will be entertained, sadned, humored and full of hope!
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email lise.work2021@gmail.com
I LOVED IT!!! Hope in the future we might hear more of the Sun Kingdom, but I'm already crying from this beautiful ending explanation. The shameless MC was great and the kingdom-building was well explained and interesting to read. I always had the feeling of "what's coming next". Although it couldn't be completed, I also really liked how you planned out the story and gave us a satisfying ending. Thanks for writing such a jewel on this website.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Interesting story, much more detailed in the practicalities of development that other novels. Character development was interesting, but MC was cringe. I appreciate the author giving feedback and making note chapters, sad to see it end
I wish it was possible to give this novel more than 5 stars. It is a really good story and I recommend that everyone should read it. It is 100% a comedy, but the good type of comedy that allows a lot of room for story development and leaves plenty of chances for very serious moments. It is a mainly light hearted story so far but you can see how the heaviness is also starting to build up. Overall, it is a very balanced and wonderful story. My recommendation is to drop whatever you are doing and read what has come out so far right away. The chapter releases also seem pretty consistent so far. It has become one of my daily reads.
Bad author for not finishing this book. I feel like crying after reading this. This best novel would have been very famous if you had finished it properly. Very beautiful story. Stupid author....🤬🤬🤬
I need exp the rest is spam. Here's the link below to continue watching the playlist of relaxing soft piano music to the same a computer that will be a room for your time and I'll get the legendary in massive tense good morning I am a little bit of a misanthrope to do it was a temporary server error the system manager and I'll get back to you.
Uma das melhores histórias já escritas nesse site que teve um final completo e todo arrumadinho com um final mais que emocionante, quem um dia ler essa história se a agarra e não vai mais querer soltar , uma ótima ralação de Cris com sua amada Mia, digo e repito um das melhores história que já li.
Haaaaaa i feel this book is dropped because you stop updating if i remember its been 2 month or more than 2 or least haaaa such a schame that i really like the funny way it you write its make me laught like the will eternal haaaa i guess you should know when to stop and to not stop updating but the novel is great
Slow .........................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Gostei muito dessa história, recomendo. A única falta é a demora na postagem de novos capítulos.........................................................................................
A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel A nice novel
Well.. Good story, kingdom development with comedy. This novel is light for read so far not to much intense plot just casual but i like it, also mc doesn't have superpowers but he has knowledge from modern world.
A really good read that is lighthearted and action packed at the same time! Has some room for improvements but a worthwhile read! World needs some improvement, characters need to evolve a bit more and an early challenge would be nice too
Epic! This story is so good I blew through all the chapters in 6 hours.... I’m hooked, keep up the amazing work. The writer is keeping it fresh on point and clearly progress is being seen without any issues reading, I’ve read hundreds of light novels and this is hands down some of the best work I’ve seen.
The first version was not only silly and fun but often cringy. Author rewrote it and its much better and more balance, world and characters are more consistent. The updates are not ultrafast and this is a good thing. And I can't wait to see the new story catch the 'beta version' and develop further. MC is NOT better, more intelligent, colder and more ''darksasuke'' than the other males of the universe and that is GOOD. The fake ''ruthless but friendly, never sexually interested but with 8 wives'' MC of too many novel is boring past the 50th novel. Plus, he have a migthy, impressive, steed with a very cool name. I hope it will have it's own set of armour someday. :)
aaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaas
One of those storyline with cute, smart MC surrounded by capable people. I truly enjoy the small incidents around the MC. And the way the author brings in technology, fairytale figures as well as the MC trying his best to chase the lead female character is refreshing. One draw back is the slow update. But it's OK if each chapter is equally exciting. 👏👏👏👏
I like city building games. But still, no wicked human? With quirky king like that, and nobody respect him, there might be someone thirst of power will usurp his throne.
assssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Keep up the good work 😉 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😅😉😉😉😉😉😅😅😉😉😉
It's a good story that is in my top five books.................................................................................................................
Good comedy, logical kingdom building and tech gap, isekai sim city or banished, but the MC is retard. Medieval women might be more "natural" than pre 80s real world, especially hairy both armpits and down, no way conform to modern beauty standard. So why the MC is so crazy about this kind of woman? Unless he has fetish about this "natural".
Awesome chapters!!!!! But I want more!!!!!!!!!! (｡+･`ω･´) (｡+･`ω･´) (｡+･`ω･´) Btw, author what is the release rate?? Thanks in advance for answering. (I will be really mad if u don't answer)
Im just here to write a review, though Im not reviewing it, I would just say that the Mc is a fresh take, the relationship is built quite good and the story progress consistently and hardly much of contradiction
Author i beg of you to please keep going.—————————————————-11111111111111111111111111———————————————————————1aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
What can I say. I love it. The kingdom building is awesome and the MC is unique. The romance between him and Mia is probably something Chinese novel will never be able to do. It's a small but steady burn, so cute and so very well done.
wonderful story, the world and characters are cerfuly crafted with loads of effort and care, it's a shame it's so short, don't let it fool you you should read it it worth all the time in exchange u will be entertained, sadned, humored and full of hope!