/ Fantasy / One Mortal Ten Thousand Gods
摘要
Little Long loved hearing tales of how humanity, in its infancy, had overcome the odds to defeat other powerful races to become the overlords of the multiverse. His favourite tale in particular was of the Supreme Sovereign Sadio Long, the leader of humanity at the turn of the era. The man who had bested ten thousand of the so called 'Gods' single handedly, granting humanity control over the multiverse.
Nowadays humanity was in its prime, little did Little Long know that there was a plot at hand. Many forces in the underground were at work, and attempted to change history, and Little Long was caught in the cross fire; losing his life.
Next thing he knew, he was in an unfamiliar environment, a small village that was surrounded by people in chains. Slaves to their masters. The language was ancient, and the technology was backwards. Little Long himself was now being called something else by those who were familiar with the body he suddenly in. He was being called Sadio!
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Good story so far. Regular updates please......................... .............................. ................. .................. ..................
Still waiting for the 6th chapter Hope OP POSTS SOON PLSby DYING OF HUNGER HERE T-T I DON'T KNOW why I'm typing in caps lol Lalalalllalalalalalalalaa 140 chars
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Your work is amazing for a few ****** reasons imo. The first of course being that you are one of the rare "authors" here who can spell. Secondly, I think you are the very first I've ever read, who manages to recreate a somewhat realistic "reincarnation", if you can call it that. Lastly, the background lore comes in somewhat appropriate portions, which makes for a living world. Congratulations with this project, as it seems to have some good prospects. On another note, your chapters could do with an additional layer of proof reading, to avoid blatant mistakes, as well as reformulating some awkward phrasing.