/ Sci-fi / (Concept Draft) In The Space Exploration Era, I Am The Only Mage
摘要
“Follow my teachings and you shall rise to heights never before seen in the cosmos!”. Jax was an ordinary young man, before a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity set him down the path of magic, in a galaxy ruled by technological might.
Authors Note:
Hey Everyone, I have been terribly busy with university, and came to realize that I had not properly planned this story out. As such I want to start fresh after taking these concepts and properly planning them out. As such this will just be a story concept of Space Era Mage for the first few chapters. I will instead release the final version once I have more of the story completed, and this will stay available as a draft. Thank you all for your support, and I will see you when Space Era Mage Returns!
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The only thing that bothers me with this series, so far, is that there's only 5 chapters. Putting a twist on the whole "space wizards and magic" theme is, in my opinion, pretty genius. There's obviously parallels to Star Wars here but so far it feels like a completely different entity and I love it. Keep it up!
Interesting first few chapters. I could immgine myself reading this Story for a long time, as long as the style and flow doesn’t change too much. A few tings I would like to see more of, more detailed descriptions of the environment , be descriptive of emotion and thought process, having the beasts/mounsters that the Protagonist encounters be described in more detail. The weird thing is that a person could be so relaxed after seeing coworkers die then crash landing on a alien planet that is known to be extremely deadly ,then barely surviving a monster encounter, being a lot more paranoid of every new alien thing would be more believable. Interesting Setting ,would like to see more of everything.