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Not many CHPs are there for now in this novel. So it is a bit difficult to give a good review. But still, I liked how mc has described the whole plot and characters. Their intricate relationships and mc being a part of the famous Hanma clan. How this mc releases himself from the web of all these fetters and will rise, is what I am waiting for. Author u r doing a great job. pls, write more and fast. And I hope that many people could give your novel a try.
Author i have been here sense day one hope you have good luke in succession of this novel also can you keep going to where it stops at the end of boruto.
can mc have extended life as a bloodline trait, like live to be idk 200 years old or something that would be awesome, he can live until the 4th ninja war
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Everything people write about here, in a laudatory manner, raises serious doubts after reading this fanfiction. A superficial story, the main character does not cause any reaction at all, just a dude who is in every second fanfiction, and the characters surrounding him are just NPCs, from which there is no need in principle, remove them and the story will not change in any way.
World background: naruto character design: cool, he has red hair, brown eyes, and a baki body maybe buffer in the future. Now this story is very good, it is action based during the waring period in naruto(madara and hasirahama era). The main character is very talented with hanma blood that makes him into a battle machine. For people who want a hero, naive, or friendship stuff this might not be for you. The mc is rulthess and wantd to fight storng people similar to madara who loves to dance in battle, expect he has almost zero emotion towards people, he killed his own adopted father cause he was weak and useless. I personally love this tyoe of mc and the story has no grammar issues from what I see. This is amazing.
This story is great the thought of starting in the Waring clans period and using the hanma clans is great the plot is excucted perfectly can't wait to see him expand his clan and join a village mabey create his own.
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Hey the book so far has been fire!! I hope this book doesn't drop definitely my favorite book in a while and I hope it won't be a long wait till the the next update!!
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This story is masterpiece in making. the start might have been unstable but the after chapter 15 it's gets so much better. the mc is a battle manic with Hanma bloodline that can evolve through battle and slaughter. he can take chakra of his descendant's through his bloodline and strength his own bloodline. mc is not a hero he is just battle manic who lives for battle. story has so much potential just waiting to be unleashed. no grammatical errors , no wannabe hero mc and a realistic mc. what else do you need in a story. now Don't waste time reading my comment and go read the story.
A solid concept wasted on a boring villain with none of Yujiro's compelling qualities. If puppy kicking villains who steal candy from babies are your deal this is for you. If you ever wondered why the bigger guys doesn't just eat the smaller guys in his way you may enjoy this novel. Solid execution of a concept I personally find distasteful.
This is a very unique fic with a Hanma in the naruto world. Mc has a personality and fighting style similar to that of Yujiro! This fic is quite dark and brutal so I wouldn't recommend it for the faintest of hearts but if your looking for a demon in human skin...this is the right fic for you.
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I really love this and please dont drop this pretty please and also please get hinata, ino,tenten, and temari Word count:sjfjsjsjdjsexsexsexsexsexsesexsexsecsexsexsexsesxsxecscexssexsecsexsexsexsexsexssxscexscexsexsexsexsexsexsecsxescecscecscexsxexsxexsxexsxexsxesex
Please make more chapters and yeah this is just for word countПожалуйста, сделайте больше глав Por favor, haga más capítulosSi prega di creare più capitoli
The story is coming soon
Great, the hanma bloodline is really fitting for a world filled with wars, I like the realism and how mc acts solely on strenght.............................