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摘要
Why is it "Hero" that "Savior" that? Why is it always the same happy ending?
"Happy" "Good" "Perfect" endings?
You know what? SCREW IT.
I will give you all the worst possible ending possible?
Why? Because I'm an asshole!
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thomas_3726 打賞 Ice cola 
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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this story is interesting and the way the vrmmo works reminds me of overlord anime but the grammar and spelling mistakes need to be fixed if you want readers to stay reading in the start and so on chapters you need to edit
The story and plot is good, but the main turnoff for me is the bad spelling and grammar.
The story was great at the begining ( and still is ) i first cheked the chimera part not because i was stupid. Overall its a good story, but i dont have coins to buy chapters so this goes only for the free ones, but i know the author is doing well up to this point.
World background is slightly okay in my opinion, the rest though could use some work
So far I’m really enjoying the mc and the decisions he’s making. the only slight problem there is the grammar at times is bad. But Overall really good.