/ Anime & Comics / [ One Piece the Gamer ]
摘要
Waking up in a strange new world he doesn't know who, where or when he is. All he knows is he's a Gamer in a 16 year old body. Finding his way, he discovers he is in the world of One Piece. With two years to train with Luffy before the Story starts. He must get stronger as fast as he can. He's going on the Adventure of a Lifetime
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寫檢討
There are a lot of missing things in this fic.... The characters are one dimensional... The OC gets trusted so easily... Usopp-Kaya ship does not sail... Mikita having no reason to be there... Chopper barely has any dialogue... The ship doesnt even have to be Marine Warship size... definitely unnecessary....
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how to believe that you will go to the end of the story, you are already too lazy to make a synopsis. how to believe that you will go to the end of the story, you are already too lazy to make a synopsis.
you are doing a splendid job with this fic, keep the good work, the only thing that disappointed me about this fic is the number of chapters.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]