摘要
Hi! This is Shuu. I decided to transfer my story to dreame.
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榜單 
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5評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
The story's plot is pretty great, would be more exciting with more twists and turns. Nontheless Familial affections are really warm and beautiful and hope our cute little ml finds his happiness in the new world. This is my first review btw so not sure of what things I had to write😅 Anyways I loved the story. can't wait for more[img=recommend]
I searched the novel on dreame but I can't find it😭 Was it not posted yet or is the site messing with me😰 I need my daily dose of rereading this QAQ
Great read. waiting for more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I want to know what happens next keep up the good work[img=recommend]
This novel has a great potential! However, I'm just a bit bothered by the fast pace. It would be nice if the conflicts are introduced in an orderly manner. And regarding Lin Feng's (current) personality. It seems that he's a bit spoiled...it would be perfect if we tone that a bit😅. Let's take it slow~
I would reccomend reading this novel. It's really great. Our main character gives us the feeling to protect him and to just yeet all the other evil such as EVERYONE besides the new people our mc meets and is good to him ofc♡(ŐωŐ人)