/ Celebridades / "Football manager" system
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In the vibrant world of football, In year 2027 a young prodigy named Kay dreams of becoming a famous soccer player. However, destiny takes a dramatic turn when a tragic accident costs Kay his dreams. Despite this devastating loss, Kay refuses to give up on his dreams, and he chose another road.
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its football you dumbss not soccer. murican cease your delinquent ways, just see the light be the one. kekw...
Nice story ... it's really about a new something ( Soccer manager ) , ... Also I like how the characters are designed .. I'm excited for the Upcoming conflicts and how our hero will face them ..
Never tells you that it’s in the future until you see busquets at a coaching thing so don’t bother with this OC player stories.
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Characters are good but there are a lot of problems. For one the entire thing feels chatGPT-ish because nearly every other line is about how the MC is ready to face the challenges along the way or that he has such a great support system behind him... it became annoying after like the 5th time he said it in one chapter. Also the 10 year olds performing advanced football skills and shots are completely unrealistic. I can only read about a child performing a step over, feint, or precise dribbling and putting a ball in the top corner of the net before I just get annoyed that it's way too unrealistic.
Hy I am the author, this novel's timeline is in 2027, so you will find some very well-known players in the story who finished their careers as a player and began their careers as a manager.
I liked the story and events, just one problem is the updates, hope that he continue the story and not drop it
First of all, you did the unforgivable... calling football "soccer"! Next, let's be serious, who wants to read a manager's novel? If it's about a player, that would be another story.