josvalve

LV 13
2017-08-05 đã tham gia Global
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josvalve
josvalve
1 years ago
Posted

I like this history a lot, I think you need to fix some issues when you talk about a girl and use she/her correctly, but so far is pretty good, also maybe use a little less of the anime chapters that you take to describe the movie, but so far I like it a lot.

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josvalve
josvalve
1 years ago
Posted

I had read until chapter 13, and the author still doesn't know how to use he/she is getting so confused to read and don't know if he is talking to a girl or a boy, also the MC talk in first person he refers sometime himself as a girl.

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josvalve
josvalve
1 years ago
Posted

The author needs to improve his English, and the MC is a pushover. He just let his father choose where he will work and don't do anything else.

josvalve
josvalve
2 years ago
Posted

The story is good, but you read 6 chapters and the next 6 chapter are a recap of the 6 chapters that you already read, jus so the autor can have new chapter this is trash.

josvalve
josvalve
3 years ago
Commented

I think the best would be to kill this fucking MC no one could be this stupid, he doesn't use inventory or his abilitys to check his new team.

josvalve
josvalve
3 years ago
Commented

This MC Is so pussy forgiving the guys that leave him alone fighting

josvalve
josvalve
3 years ago
Posted

drooping................................................................................................................................ .....

josvalve
josvalve
3 years ago
Posted

Everything was okay until the author make the MC been attract to a trap drooping this novel..................................................

josvalve
josvalve
3 years ago
Commented

this is a fucking shit of novel...dropped