Requiem_Phantom

I hope the naming stuff gets fixed. After all the titles should go before the name and not after. Instead of Luca junior it should be junior Luca. Or Witch Doctor Luca, not the other way around.

Love the book, I hope we get more chapters soon!

Yeah I think I’m done with this forced bullshit. This all could have been avoided if Mc made better choices and was smarter whatever. I’m dropping.

You know I enjoy this book but so far there are two major problems. One I believe which will probably be fixed over time. The other I’m not sure. For one, Jack needs to grow some balls. I’m getting sick of how he’s been acting but I believe this is all just to show growth so it will probably be handled in time. But the do the roen I’m not sure. To me, Daruun actually takes away from the main character. Idk because of fate and Daruun practically handing plans to Jack, it just makes him not seem special or even talented. He’s just a tool for Daruun to use in his plans. Idk I just guess I was hoping for MC to be kind of badass and smart to where he’s coming up with plans and outsmarting people and achieving things himself instead of it just being fated or being told what to do. He may still have to do the things he is told but it’s a lot easier when the map is laid out for you.

I feel like rogue would be a good choice though maybe not Jean grey. Could have him help rogue find ways to control her powers and whatnot which helps her fall in love or something along those lines.