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8 days ago
Replied to yosef_melul

Another moment that I forgot to mention - "xianxia world" is your idea of other xianxia books. This isn't Song China or a classic cultivation world, it is stated in the first sentence in the novel to be a very specific place (and its lore is unusual, even the century the "main" world is in is only hinted at originally).

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Denion
8 days ago
Replied to yosef_melul

Hi. Xin definitely doesn't "blow off" what happened. Trauma responses don't come immediately like in Hollywood movies. My experience as a therapist is enough to claim that Xin is reacting realistically. He breaks down slower and over time. Lei's slang is urban, modern and dirty. The analogue of this in modern English is the way he speaks (at least the best I could come up with. Xin is also weirded out by the way he speaks). In terms of prose and grammar needing improvement - yeah, I agree. If you have any specific examples - please provide them and I'll improve.

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Denion
13 days ago
Replied to BurgerSectMaster

Hi, it's in the comments of the chapter.

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Denion
17 days ago
Replied to dayamaryllis

>These guys are also supposed to be degenerates. Are they? Xin decides not to risk his life fighting a horde of qi active animals, never means he's a sociopath. There's also gratitude involved, as Lei saved his life. The criticism of too much dialogue might be valid, thank you.

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Denion
17 days ago
Replied to dayamaryllis

My personal experience as a therapist (and a human) shows there is a subset of people acting in exactly this manner when stressed. Not sure what else to say, Lei's behaviour is certainly not usual, but I wouldn't go as far as to say they're unrealistic. I guess you're seeing that both of these guys have a certain approach to handling stress in conflict, and a similar one at that.

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Denion
17 days ago
Replied to dayamaryllis

Please pay attention. Even the mc notes the pronunciation is weird.

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Denion
1 months ago
Replied to St_Armax

yay wholesome rapist cannibal animal companion who wants to destroy your soul!

"Xin! What are you even saying?! This is stupid! Where would you be without me? Not just my abilities, but the motivation I gave you! The lust for battle, the urge to keep going, the hunger to become a better person! How can you discard this all, after all we went through, together? A wise man knows to let go, forget our quarrels and let's become friends! It's the smartest choice! If you let me live, I'll have no means of overtaking your soul. But if you try to refine me, you know how fierce I can get!"

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1 months ago
Replied to BurgerSectMaster

I promise Xin's fighting and cultivation style will evolve, that's for sure.

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Denion
1 months ago
Replied to St_Armax

This will be elaborated on. As cultivation levels progress, the cultivation itself becomes more complex and multifaceted. When I said this novel is more complex than earlier chapters might hint, I meant it.

Xin spent three more days meditating. He kept hunting, slowly consuming spirit leaves and training physically, but mostly focused on soul exchange. Absorbing the tiger's soul essence, he also donated his own soul essence for the totem to absorb. Given that a human's soul regenerates faster and is much more malleable, it was a good way to break an already weakened totem's resistance. It was a draining process, at times leaving Xin feeling like a human qi drained ghoul, but he persevered.

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1 months ago
Replied to BurgerSectMaster

Thank you! I am sitting on a backlog of chapters, but I want to finish writing the current arc (2 more chapters, so ~2 more days) before I start editing and posting them. Really appreciate your power stones, they motivate me to keep writing. Come join the discord if you want to discuss something or ask questions. https://discord.gg/Nvj7yPJr4q

  • As Heavens Divide original

    As Heavens Divide

    Action ACTION DARK CULTIVATION SURVIVAL ANTIHERO EASTERN

    In a crumbling realm of a long-dead immortal, in a forsaken corner of the universe, two souls cross paths. Xin is a burnout prodigy, living a solitary life as a hunter, until one day he sees his hometown levelled to the ground by a giant boar. Wu Lei is a street urchin, persevering through a lifetime of pain and abuse, forced into a criminal syndicate at a very young age. Talented cultivators, yet flawed and troubled humans — if the pair is to grow, they'll have to face what's inside. This is a dark, slow-burning tale of resilience and transformation. In a world where grand narratives are forged, not given, and shortcuts are carved, not found, Xin and Lei embark on a relentless journey of martial arts, cultivation and friendship, with its beautiful ups and painful downs. https://discord.gg/Nvj7yPJr4q - my discord. New chapters, a backlog of 130 plus less edited chapters, shitposting.

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    Eastern ACTION ADVENTURE DARK CULTIVATION ANTIHERO MULTIPLELEADS XIANXIA NOCHEATS

    In a slowly crumbling world of a long-dead immortal, two souls meet. Xin is a burnout prodigy, living a solitary life as a hunter, until one day he sees his hometown levelled to the ground by a giant boar. Lei is a street urchin, living a life of pain and abuse, forced into a criminal syndicate at a very young age. When these two meet, they are astonished by how similar and different they are at the same time, and a troubled friendship forms. This is a dark, slow-burning tale of resilience and transformation. In a world where grand narratives are forged, not given, and shortcuts are carved, not found, Xin and Lei embark on a relentless journey of martial arts, cultivation, and friendship, with its beautiful ups and painful downs. Authors note: When I say dark, I mean it. This is not a power fantasy book, although it has its payoff moments, and the mcs are meant to frustrate, to a degree. I'm answering all the comments and feedback on my discord, where I post early chapters (pre-release drafts). Please come join, I really value constructive criticism https://discord.gg/Nvj7yPJr4q Extra tags: Alchemy, Survival, Business, detailed fighting scenes, Psychological, Strong language. Little update: Editing and refining early chapters again, as my skils have improved since then. Tell me what you think. Hi RR, VulpesDenion is me

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