I was supportive towards the author at the start, however the author started to change the chapters just to extend the story and converted existing open chapters into locked chapters. The quality of English is mediocre, this is just another story about an overpowered MC that’s climbing up the ranks beyond what anyone can do, you can find a hundred stories like this on MTL websites. The quality of translation will also be the same. There’s basically very little originality in this story, and despite repeated reminders the quality of the writing hasn’t improved. You can see the chapter titles and tell how much effort has gone into this. It’s just somebody trying to use their spare time to earn some money. That’s all this work amounts to.
Did you change the chapter?
Be a little more careful when using Grammarly. Just check one sentence at a time. Also, I can’t scroll down from chapter 26 to chapter 27. Some problems with webnovel.
It should be “the beggar’s mocking words”.
Chen Yang staggered, thrown off balance by the beggar's moking words. "Young miss ? Do not give me that nonsense! Do you think I will let you go if you claim her as your young miss?" He trailed off, his cheeks flushing slightly. "Erm and I know where is my mushroom."
Expose other to get stronger
Eastern · king_villaa
Nice, you used my suggestion. This chapter has almost no problems and is easy to read. I suggest re-doing the previous chapters using Grammarly/Quillbot or something else. That way more people will read the starting chapters.
No ideas for the story, just a recommendation to use Grammarly or another English language checking app while writing. It’s a little difficult to understand.
Review for the first 64 chapters: It’s alright. There’s very little of the typical cultivation tropes. No face slapping, nobody is out to get the MC straight away. He transmigrated into the body of a 40-year old early Qi cultivation man. He has a system, however there are no missions or exchanges with it. It just tells him about his status, and every time he successfully uses a skill/spell, it increases the experience by one. Same for cultivation realms. So far he’s reached the middle of 5th Qi cultivation. No greatness, just a poor guy trying to survive in the cultivation world. Hopefully the realm upgrades get a little faster, his combat capabilities are already equal to 7th to 8th Qi cultivation. That’s thanks to his grinding skills over several months.
Living steadily in the world of gods and mystery
Eastern · Do not toy with others