Thank you for giving me feedback on my writing. I'm glad you think my writing is based on ChatGPT results, meaning my writing is as good as ChatGPT's. However, I'm just a beginner who doesn't use ChatGPT. Maybe you can help me correct other mistakes 😊
Here is the translation of the Korean text you provided:
Neris Truide was born with the legendary purple jewel eyes of the ancient warrior Elandria. Despite this, her peers at the noble academy bully her mercilessly, destroying her self-esteem. Adopted by the wealthy and powerful duke Elandria because of her jewel eyes, Neris eventually marries Crown Prince Abelus―only to be pushed aside for his mistress Megara, who led the bullying at school. Neris's life ends at age thirty when she is poisoned by her adoptive sister Valentin. However, instead of dying, she wakes up back at age twelve with her memories of her previous life intact. Enrolled at the academy once more, she sets about exacting revenge on those who ostracized, assaulted, and ultimately murdered her. But she didn't expect that in this life, she'd cross paths with Cledwyn Maindulante, the cunning future ruler of the north. As a determined Neris sets out to make her enemies suffer―and prevent her murder―will Cledwyn turn out to be a dangerous foe, or her closest ally ever?
The devastated territory of Pervaz, after a long war and its new Lord who must raise Pervaz, Asha Pervaz.
She approached the Emperor in hopes of receiving rewards for her victory, but what she received was a greeting with ridicule as the ‘barbarian princess’ and an absurd proposal to give her the choice of a marriage partner as a reward for victory.Asha had to make the best choice in this situation.
“Then…… Duke Carlyle Haven.”
She points to the 1st prince, who is ranked 1st in the nobility list and who was recently stripped of his crown prince status due to a huge scandal.
She thought that if he got angry and refused, she would demand compensation for it, but unexpectedly, Carlyle accepted her choice.Promising enormous support for the reconstruction of Pervaz.
“What do you want from me?”
“Don’t care what I do in Pervaz. Don’t expect to be treated as a wife, and don’t even think about siding with me. And when I ask you to, just sign the divorce papers without complaining.”
It was a deal that Asha could not be disappointed with.She took the hand of this arrogant man who even ridiculed his father, the emperor.
A charming smile spread across his lips.
“I’ll be looking forward to work with you from now on, wife.”
It's heartbreaking to see what has become of it 😭
The Price Is Your Everything
Fantasy · Ibuibujadoel