alaran88

Very good writing with engaging leads. Character driven with (for now?) weak setting. Still probably worth a read for romantacy fans.

A good start. Even though both leads are fairly clished archetypes(her naivety and his darkness), it is well written. It gets to the plot almost immediately at the cost of character depth, but hopefully they will become more embellished as the plot progresses.

Quick review after 5 chapters. No obvious spelling or grammar mistakes. Decently written MC, though stereotypical naive. So far seems like it is worth a try, especially if you like the more typical fantasy stories.