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Mr Nobody

2024-01-04 đã tham gia Global
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BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
10 months ago
Posted

Amazing storyline, it's kinda cliche, but what story isn't? Tai is very understandable, and the characters are well defined. Looking forward to seeing how he rises to the top despite his weak Affinity.

BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Commented

😫😫😫

"Throw this failure and all these useless human sacrifices into the ditch!... Then gather more sacrifices within three days. We will start another ritual by then."

Goddess' Assassin System

Goddess' Assassin System

Fantasy · UelUel

BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Commented

I won't be suprised if she does

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Goddess' Assassin System

Goddess' Assassin System

Fantasy · UelUel

BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Posted

For your first try, I'd say you did really great!😁😁 Reading this is just like watching a TV show, and honestly, that's what I think a slice of life should be like.

BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Commented

I've been wondering so too

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Goddess' Assassin System

Goddess' Assassin System

Fantasy · UelUel

BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Commented

sheesh, Visare, that's harsh!😂

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Goddess' Assassin System

Goddess' Assassin System

Fantasy · UelUel

BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Posted

My friend, GTHarris08, referred me to this book, and I must say that I'm really impressed.😁I just hope that the main character's name is not really fluffy sleepyhead, that's really funny 😂😂.

BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Replied to

read the first chapter of yours before you talk

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BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Posted

ok, I've read only the first four chapters, and I must say that I am impressed.most especially with your writing style.a reader can literally feel how Luka feels and can easily relate to him. also, I hope that he meets Von again somehow and teach him a nice lesson when he's stronger.keep up the good work!

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BlaqGthree
BlaqGthree
11 months ago
Posted

Make frequent updates. the story is really good but you update too slowly.

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