Mela7

Mela7

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Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
Posted

In chapter 2, you told us he was why of confronting Fei about his supposed emotions then you proceeded to tell us they were actually in a relationship...I got confused you painted a picture where they didn't know each other Minor grammar and tense tweaks Beautiful story you rock💜

Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
Replied to PhoenixMoh

💜💜Thank you Add to your library to get updated

Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
Replied to Daoist6w6QhO

Thank you so much💜 Add to your library to get updated

Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
Posted

You obviously did your research And I absolutely adore Greek Gods so I'm going to love this And Thanatos is totally bad ass Great job Btw Alex hates you 😏😏

Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
Replied to XeanRBX

😊😊we appreciate your feedback kindly add to your library to receive updates

Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
Posted

Good start The beginning was very good I mean who doesn't love a war story Good writing The chapters are kind of on the long side but amazing work

Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
Replied to OkiFukuro

💜💜🎀

Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
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Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
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Mela7
Mela7
2 months ago
Posted

It's good just minor adjustments Lyra is from a family of 5...not 3. She has 2 siblings plus her parents except they're dead Well she most definitely did not need to die like that but good job Solid English solid plot solid emotion building You rock

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    Blood oath: World war V

    Fantasy R18 DARK REVENGE VAMPIRE WEREWOLF ROYALFAMILY ALPHA

    4.78

    In a world where vampires and other species are hunted by werewolves, Carmilla, a vengeful vampire, seeks justice for her father's brutal murder at the hands of the Crimson Pack, the dominant werewolf clan. Entangled with the royal family, Carmilla captivates the two princes, but her heart belongs to Lucian, the Crimson Pack's lethal Zeta and her father's killer. As Carmilla navigates treacherous werewolf politics and vendettas, her love for Lucian clashes with her desire for revenge. "Your kingdom, your father, your whole life," Carmilla hissed. "I'll set it all on fire, and you can't stop me." "No, I'd let it all burn for you," Lucian whispered, his life hanging in the balance. Torn between loyalty, love, and vengeance, Carmilla must confront her inner darkness. Will she claim her rightful revenge or risk everything for the forbidden love that threatens to consume her?

    11 Chs 11 sưu tầm

  • Zhilakoa: The Guardian of Balance. original

    Zhilakoa: The Guardian of Balance.

    History R18 MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS

    4.81

    The sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm orange glow over the vast expanse of the Aethereia Wastes. Zhilakoa stood at the edge of the sacred forest, her feet bare and her toes curled over the edge of the cliff. The wind whispers secrets in her ear, carrying the ancient wisdom of Eywa on its gentle breeze. She closed her eyes, breathing in the scent of blooming razorflowers and the distant hint of smoke from the Kraelion Empire's encroaching forces. "Zhilakoa, daughter of Jaya, the time of great change is upon us," the wind whispered. "Will you answer the call, or will you falter?"

    30 Chs 15 sưu tầm

  • Luna's Eclipse original

    Luna's Eclipse

    Teen R18 MAGIC MYSTERY DARK CAMPUS VAMPIRE WEREWOLF DEVIL

    What happens when the daughter of a demon lord and witch gets mated to the Alpha. What has the goddess Selene fated Melanie

    18 Chs 9 sưu tầm