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Also, I fixed it. Thanks for the heads up.
Right, I forgot that part about eye anatomy.
Oh, right, sorry, I must've forgotten to write it and missed it in the proofreading. Thanks for the help.
Some scribe or another. Even in our world, places like this always have written logs kept in case something bad happens and an inspection needs to be done.
The [Comprehend Language] spell is but a first level spell, so it is not that comprehensive. For instance, it allows understanding of written and spoken language, but the user can't write in that same language as they don't know the alphabet of it or its grammar.
"Idsfen... jworj... swtown...," the guy spoke with a language unknown to William as tar-colored tears began pouring down from his eyes. He tried to stand up again and continue what he was previously doing. However, another hacking fit came over him that was even worse than the previous two. Now, black liquid was pouring out of every orifice on his face, resulting in a gruesome scene.
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
It has something to dow with the spell only affecting his 'corporeal body'. This means that as a soul form, he doesn't have the effect of the [Comprehend Language] spell.
"Idsfen... jworj... swtown...," the guy spoke with a language unknown to William as tar-colored tears began pouring down from his eyes. He tried to stand up again and continue what he was previously doing. However, another hacking fit came over him that was even worse than the previous two. Now, black liquid was pouring out of every orifice on his face, resulting in a gruesome scene.
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
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Well, it's not like the MC's going to wear it. It is more of a restriction type of memory than anything.
The man got his eyes gouged out, his tongue cut, and his ears burned shut for his crimes and hubris. His handsome face was skinned and turned into a hideous mask for him to wear. His body and spirit were broken by his captors.
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
The hell is sword of consolation?
P.S. WHat do you guys think if I had Sunny, who had somehow died while doing his third Nightmare, regress back into his younger current self (of course that version of Sunny will be the one from the OG Shadow Slave Novel where William isn't there). I think it will be required to level the playing field for Sunny, and it could lead to interesting interactions in the future. Don't get your panties in a twist. This is just a question and isn't an announcement or anything like that.
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
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The only thing he saw was the copy of himself. He didn't have the ability to see souls yet.
'So only I can see it? Maybe it had something to do with the [Soul Sight] ability. Great... not only do I argue with an imaginary copy of myself, but now I can also see dead people. I'm sure Schizophrenic King is much more apt to describe me than Lich King at this point.'
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
We'll see.
ch 42 Chapter XLII: From the Frying Pan and Into the Flame (5)
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Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
Thanks for the support. I personally don't like reading fanfiction that is just a copy-paste of the original plot but with a different MC. I also strive to put my own mark in the works I write so that my readers get something both different and familiar to experience.
ch 42 Chapter XLII: From the Frying Pan and Into the Flame (5)
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Eu também, cara. Eu também.
ch 42 Chapter XLII: From the Frying Pan and Into the Flame (5)
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
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It was her own. She got the armor from Nephis in the original novel in exchange for her rope.
After finishing their dinner, Cassie shared the water her [Endless Spring] memory to wash it down and whatever meat was left was smoked to be preserved for later consumption in case they couldn't find food later on. Of course, he used more of his magic to speed up the process, and by the end, he had enough smoked meat to last them both for a couple of days.
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
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Unfortunately. I tried to make it work, but it soon turned into a copy-paste of the original plot with a different character. The plot is all based on the [Slave] ability, which is honestly useless to the MC who could grow stronger by simply stressing himself. My whole concept for the MC was wrong now that I think about it. The plot needed a much weaker MC so that him being under Kyouka's ability would be justified.
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We'll see :)
[Monarch Beyond the Grave] Attribute Description: "Even among the dead there is a hierarchy. You are the monarch of the living dead. All undead follow your commands without question. Hostile undead are suppressed innately by the nature of you regal presence."
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Tf?
Then, with a gentle tug, the boot slid off her leg, revealing pure white semi-transparent stockings underneath.
Genshin Impact: I Can Obtain Adventure EXP
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2~3 chapters/ week until I catch up to the available manga chapters.
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Essentially, yes, that is the major premise of the plot. The MC has his own special traits that he received upon reincarnation, so he won't be solely reliant on the power of [Slave]. I'm gonna be honest with you here, I may be way too over my head with. I just wanted to write something easy to help my mind stay fresh to write my main fanfic. However, upon writing the chapters and interactions, it dawned to me that this series is extremely dependent on the protagonist being under Kyouka's [Slave] power for much of the shenanigans to ensue. I'm trying to find a method to not just write the same plot but with a different character. I am not especially confident in this fanfic. If I don't manage to make it somehow unique; then, I'll have to axe it and proceed with another side project.
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The aspect of [Living Lich King] is not something that exists in SS. The Lich King I am using as a rough template is the one from World of Warcraft. Like the MC, the aspect is something that can't canonically exist in the world due to it violating the domains of several of the seven Gods.
Undead Monarch Abilities(Not Aspect Abilities) : [Mantle of Death], [Undead Resilience], [Soul Sight]
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
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No definite answer. Work in progress.
ch 0 1 [RW] Chapter I: The White Mountain
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