just don't pay attention to him, the guy is an imbecile, your story is good, it's one of my favorites, focus only on the positive and not on the comments of idiots with the mentality of a 5 year old child.
** Any troll review or hate comments will be removed. Feel free to bash me if you can form coherent opinions and logical criticism, I welcome it even. I'm trying to improve my skills after all.
TV · Virtuosso
What happened?
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TV · Virtuosso
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Lara changed into Paititi clothes: a blue heron tunic with a blue and gold scheme. She also put on a bracelet and necklace made of gold. Even her sandals, with straps wrapping around the ankles and lower legs, had gold.
Anime & Comics · SteffenStephen
Good
Yeah, so I've been thinking about the contradictory feedbacks I'm getting and decided to just give up trying to make sense of everything, and do my own thing. No matter what you do , you can't make everyone happy, unless you write a harem story with kinky r-18 stuff . So, I'm gonna just write as best as I can, and hopefully it should be good, considering what I've planned for it.
TV · Virtuosso
I created this
p.s - Yeah, I changed my last name since I don't think I'll ever get legitimized here, and the bastard thing was getting boring. So I decided to found my own house, neat right?
TV · Virtuosso
very good story, please publish more chapters.
The ability of sukuna can kill the target, buggy's ability is more of the type to incapacitate the enemy, I mean that buggy alone with his fruit could not hurt anyone, he has to use other means as weapons, on the other hand sukuna's ability by itself can hurt others.
Buggy also spent some time developing his Devil Fruit powers. His Chop-Chop Fruit wasn't bad. Once he awakened it, it could definitely rival the Gura Gura no Mi (Tremor-Tremor Fruit) as a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit.
Anime & Comics · ShixT9
interesting, I will be waiting for the next chapter, the premise seems to me super original by the way and it calls me a lot of attention
sukuna's ability is more of a cut, while Buggy's is to split.
Buggy also spent some time developing his Devil Fruit powers. His Chop-Chop Fruit wasn't bad. Once he awakened it, it could definitely rival the Gura Gura no Mi (Tremor-Tremor Fruit) as a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit.
Anime & Comics · ShixT9
I never thought I'd see a LonaRPG story, I'll be reading it.
Chapter 1
The New Story of Lona Falldin
Video Games · Dfyz58869050