DaoistNCUpff

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DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
1 months ago
Posted

This dude threatened us that if we don't support this he would dropped the other novel.

DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
1 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter!

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DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
1 months ago
Commented

the fallen, in like..... an angel?

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DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
1 months ago
Commented

Interesting start

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DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
7 months ago
Posted

The pacing bro, improve the pacibg. The monologue are engaging, but shorten them a bit for better enjoyable read or fused them with actions.

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DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
10 months ago
Commented

I also want to be look at like that👀

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DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
10 months ago
Posted

I abdolutely love Leo's character writing. I really hope he have future screen time. Then again we haven't even see his backstory, so I have a decently high hope.The writing was good, good execution, but id have prefer more emotional attachment with leo.

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DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
10 months ago
Commented

Me doing my homeworks 1 hour before deadlimes be like

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DaoistNCUpff
DaoistNCUpff
10 months ago
Commented

Would we get more eploration of her father? he seems like a cool guy

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