Thanks for the chapter!
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the fallen, in like..... an angel?
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Interesting start
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The pacing bro, improve the pacibg. The monologue are engaging, but shorten them a bit for better enjoyable read or fused them with actions.
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I also want to be look at like that👀
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I abdolutely love Leo's character writing. I really hope he have future screen time. Then again we haven't even see his backstory, so I have a decently high hope.The writing was good, good execution, but id have prefer more emotional attachment with leo.
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Me doing my homeworks 1 hour before deadlimes be like
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Would we get more eploration of her father? he seems like a cool guy
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This dude threatened us that if we don't support this he would dropped the other novel.
Wrong Game, Right Hero: Reincarnated as the Hero From NTR Game.
Fantasy · G_Seniore