N3xt3ch

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N3xt3ch
3 days ago
Posted

Quite frankly, frustrating. Story seems interesting however there is several plot flaws. I do not know if this is due to the raw or absolutely abysmal translation efforts but there is constantly chapters where the next chapter alone either changes what just happened with no explanation or even a few chapters later is invalidated. for example the main character catches a pokemon but then the very start of the next chapter they are supposedly still attempting to capture it? like what?? or there is times where he supposedly doesn't have a pokemon he just had a couple chapters earlier. Do not recommend unless the author goes back and fixes the mess they made.

N3xt3ch
N3xt3ch
2 months ago
Posted

I like the premise, writing seems good (no obvious errors at least), hasn't been boring for me yet. Keep up the good work.

N3xt3ch
N3xt3ch
3 months ago
Commented

err... 4,000,000 - 200,000 isn't anywhere close to 2,000,000?????

The total payout for the mission was six million. After giving Merlin his share, four million remained. Now, after deducting another two hundred thousand, Frank was left with just over two million.

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N3xt3ch
N3xt3ch
4 months ago
Commented

+1

2. I like this development, I want to see the sequel of this story as it is.

Wednesday Addams' Second Personality (Deprecated)

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