Ahjln

Ahjln

male LV 13

LXXVI it means 76, and 76 is my lucky number. this year will be my year I will be competing in WSA 2025.

2023-08-13 đã tham gia United States
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Ahjln
Ahjln
8 days ago
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Author here, this book may be a year old at this point but I have big plans for it in the future, I will upload once a week on Friday at 9:30 exactly

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Ahjln
Ahjln
9 days ago
Posted

As the Author I must rate this 5 stars, because it is my work. so hello reader I hope you are enjoying the book if you have any questions please ask them I'm very open to answering questions,

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Ahjln
Ahjln
9 months ago
Replied to ShowmikBD

Not currently, but there will be later in the novel.

Ahjln
Ahjln
1 years ago
Commented

So the powers that they have slighty confuse me but maybe Im just dumb, but the pacing is a little fast and that makes some things possibly confusing so I would try to work on slowing the pacing quite a bit but decent chapter.

Ahjln
Ahjln
1 years ago
Replied to scarycereal

It is good that you can see some of the issues you have please try to fix the paceing issue since the character development can be showed in latter chapters

Ahjln
Ahjln
1 years ago
Commented

Im a little confused on some of the things you have but the concept seems to be kinda of solid so good job. ill keep reading it for a while if there in improvement so best of luck.

Ahjln
Ahjln
1 years ago
Replied to Elysian_weaver

Loved the book so far, and as a fellow author I can just recommend to not listening to the hate but to also still listening since some people will give real advice

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Ahjln
Ahjln
1 years ago
Commented

Other than the issue with the text saying 5 out of 100 exp and then when the status screen says 5 out of 10 exp I would say that this book so far is pretty good for a start, I hope you continue to write and not quit like many authors

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Ahjln
Ahjln
1 years ago
Commented

Solid first chapter

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Ahjln
Ahjln
1 years ago
Commented

this book seems interesting

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