lauren_jade

thank you, thank you for such an amazing story. I kept going back for more and couldn't wait for the next chapter it's a shame not being able to read it anymore.

can't wait for the next chapters! I like how he's growing through hard work and not being given everything right from the start. the mc has lots of opportunities to be strong. I like how inventive mc training is.

it's okay. I like the manipulate mc pretending not to be an asshole. I hated how it started. the beginning was overused, cliche and uncreative. dislike how reliant the mc is on the gamer system. I did not see the point in continuing because it was uninteresting. I could see myself reading more but when enters dungeons I get more bored of the three chapters long fights.