Heavenly_Sovereign

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Heavenly_Sovereign
4 days ago
Replied to Heavenly_Sovereign

If someone's gonna say his mind will not be strong enough to tank the pain, then I'd say he can easily train that weakness.

Heavenly_Sovereign
Heavenly_Sovereign
4 days ago
Commented

Question what's stopping Daniel to just go close to a blackhole or neutron star and keep spamming his core while keeping enough distance to not be obliterated immediately just causing his body to have enough pressure to just evolve at a rapid pace if those examples are too much for his current strength then he could start with high gravity planets first.

Heavenly_Sovereign
Heavenly_Sovereign
4 days ago
Commented

I like the choices. i just hope that this does not become a catch em all harem where theres enough women to create a village cause i don't like to see him stealing the girl's of other mc's who actually deserves the women they have like ikki, shin, and rimuru their chill and would be nice friends basically the homies.

Heavenly_Sovereign
Heavenly_Sovereign
4 days ago
Replied to DaoistmvWChj

So he gets powerful enough to stand with anos?

Heavenly_Sovereign
Heavenly_Sovereign
10 days ago
Commented

The flow of the story

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Heavenly_Sovereign
15 days ago
Commented

That's a good edition, making adding a power system that complements martial arts and adding more detterents so that humans are less considered livestock because in worlds like DxD, humans are basically used as servants, pawns or commodities.

And as several people have asked me, I will also include Kenichi the mightiest disciple, but in my story Shirahama Kenichi will not exist, partly because I don't like to have two characters with the same name.

Saruyama Kenichi takes control

Saruyama Kenichi takes control

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Heavenly_Sovereign
Heavenly_Sovereign
20 days ago
Replied to Heavenly_Sovereign

I forgot to mention that the title is different. it's ( I! Heaven's Will, Let Teyvat Become The Supreme World) or the chinese is (我!天理,让提瓦特成为至高世界)

Heavenly_Sovereign
Heavenly_Sovereign
20 days ago
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Oww, ye. Make teyvat supreme can be read on reader-hub.com for free it currently has 706 chapters its a mtl website, so it might not be a god-like translation. it's passable and better than most.

Heavenly_Sovereign
Heavenly_Sovereign
20 days ago
Commented

The story has a great premise. i just hope the author makes progress and improves the story, and needs more in-depth writing. i dont know how to explain how to become better and make progress. i apologize for not having any great advice and comments that look like criticism which is not just emotional that i saw a story that actually has a great idea that can turm into a story which connects multiverses like what the author said (Make teyvat supreme) that story was good had a great in-depth power system and nationalized the differences in power rankings aswell as having a accurate depiction of the worlds they introduce not high balling some worlds while also keeping it consistent.

Heavenly_Sovereign
Heavenly_Sovereign
20 days ago
Commented

My idea of Super-Class angels is that they become holy light, like in the story of Custom made demon king because sizerchs true form is made of power of destruction, meaning he is like an energy body.

Elizabeth:" my children who is willing to guard the angel pool they must be at least a ultimate class?" ( it goes low-class mid-class high-class ultimate-class seraph-class and super angel-class dragon god-class michael, gabriel, raphael, uriel, are seraph class and elizabeth is half step dragon god-class)

transmigrated as Elizabeth in dxd

transmigrated as Elizabeth in dxd

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