Daoist_Night_Star

1 years ago

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"Your… Divine Abilities."

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

Daoist_Night_Star

1 years ago

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This one seems to have good potential. The story seems quite interesting with good writing. Hope the Author don't mess up in the future. 🙌🏻✨

Origin of The Origin : The Path to Ascendance

Fantasy · MOONshadow_

Daoist_Night_Star

1 years ago

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Thank you for the chapter.

ch 0 1 The Fallen One

Origin of The Origin : The Path to Ascendance

Fantasy · MOONshadow_

Daoist_Night_Star

1 years ago

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Why is there 2 last name??🤔🤔🤨

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Daoist_Night_Star

1 years ago

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So far the story progresses slowly but not boring. A new idea with physical activities along with a protagonist who was a thief and ruthless. I didn't find any grammatical errors 🙌🏻. Waiting for more new chapters ❤️... Hope the character development will be good ✨

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Daoist_Night_Star

1 years ago

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Thank you for the chapter 🙌🏻🔥

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