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Just another guy you met yesterday...........

2023-06-20 đã tham gia India
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YourAverage_Reader
YourAverage_Reader
4 days ago
Replied to Cosmic_Soul_

have already published it?? your work??

YourAverage_Reader
YourAverage_Reader
5 days ago
Replied to SYED_AFAQ

a summoner's strength lies in his summon, so if he could summon godly beings, create a cult or influence events through shadows why would he need to physically involve himself in a battle. as for ur question, for most part his role would be strategical while goblins, claire or other summons fight the battle. and off course their is no ntr

YourAverage_Reader
YourAverage_Reader
6 days ago
Replied to _RyuSaki

You have to be contracted for adding chatacter image. And if you are contracted, you can do so through inkstone

YourAverage_Reader
YourAverage_Reader
13 days ago
Replied to The_Book_Critic

I appreciate you review. but let me address the points u raised. 1. overused reincarnation plot, see the from the synopsis and even title you already know reincarnation or transmigration is going to happen. I don't see any point in using an unique way for reincarnation, because it doesn't really matter story is after the reincarnation event and how the reincarnation takes place is least of a concern for any reader ig. 2. so basically you found Mc's personality to be a cliché, well i don't know, u may have read more novels than me, but see i tried to make Mc as based and realistic as i could. even the first chapter of novel is focused on exploring mc's views and establishing his chatacter which remain constant till the latest updated chapter [5]. 3. Ig i could have but i write story with plot build up approach where i set everything up create a atmosphere and then delivery a pay off, unlike for example fated villain, which already start on high note. like protagonist is in marriage talks and where he is first faced with chosen ones (this already deliver story's essence) but mine start slowly from a room where mc as chance to prepare. to summarise it i think it's too early to judge it's still on building phase and will need couple chapters more to get to on pay offs. but i really appreciate your review and i liked it a lot that u kept it real and in the end whatever i say it won't matter if story is boring, right? intriguing way of reincarnation, unique plot and stuffs are supposed to be add ons a great story has but in essence it have to be enjoyable atleast. so i will do my best to make it enjoyabls and delivery it in best way possible. thanks for reading!

YourAverage_Reader
YourAverage_Reader
YourAverage_Reader
22 days ago
Replied to vasco_pereira

now i think about tru

But the real highlight of the room was the temperature optimizer. This system automatically adjusted the room's temperature to fit the user's comfort level. I can't quite describe it, but the way it perfectly tuned the room to my preferences was almost therapeutic.

I Will Kill The Extra

I Will Kill The Extra

Fantasy · YourAverage_Reader

YourAverage_Reader
YourAverage_Reader
22 days ago
Replied to vasco_pereira

I got what you mean but think from his perspective, he has to now help rebuild a clan he never heard about on that, also have to help avenge a family of another extra. things also start moving too fast for him, so In this bizarre situation little bit of whining is expected. if he kept being nonchalant about everything Don't u his character would have superficial and forced. But after getting inside academy, if u have noticed it, his attitude move towards more positive side. He is confident and has a definite plan.

"You have an organization?" I frowned slightly, trying to keep my confusion hidden. If he really had an organization, especially one with motives of rebuilding Stevenheart, it should've at least been mentioned somewhere. 

I Will Kill The Extra

I Will Kill The Extra

Fantasy · YourAverage_Reader

YourAverage_Reader
YourAverage_Reader
24 days ago
Replied to AllaroundBaka

Yeah, I changed it. This one suits story better ig. you think it's good?

I know the chapter was a stretch, the whole chapter was nothing but a fight, It's like you are reading Dragon B_jjkkj_all's novel, right? 

My Sacrificial Summoning System

My Sacrificial Summoning System

Fantasy · YourAverage_Reader

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YourAverage_Reader
26 days ago
Commented

great read Author

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27 days ago
Commented

great chapter

  • My Sacrificial Summoning System original

    My Sacrificial Summoning System

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG VILLAIN LEVELUP

    Mới cập nhật

    "If power demands blood, then let it flow. I'll trade souls for strength, no matter the cost." Once the cherished son of a great noble family, Arthur’s life completely shatters when he is betrayed by his so-called brothers. Helpless, he watched as the person who meant everything to him, his mother, get brutally murdered before his very own yet, powerless eyes. Her last breaths haunted him, the image of her bare bruised body burned into his mind, fueling a rage he could never contain. But rage alone was useless. In a world ruled solely by strength, Arthur’s was taken from him. His mana core was shattered, he was left half-blinded and his body crippled. The once-promising noble son was now nothing more than a broken shell. Just an ordinary being, No, by the world’s standard maybe he was even lower than those. He no longer wished to live, what value was there in living if he could only suffer in silence, forever chained by the injustice he’d endured? Just at the time, a whisper rang in his ear. Was this his chance? “What are you?” [Searching familiar terms so Host may better understand...] [Search complete!] [I am the Sacrificial Summoning System.] A system? “So, the gods haven’t forsaken me after all.” [The more souls are sacrificed, the stronger the summon will be.] "Or maybe it's the devil," ******* Update Schedule: 1 Chapter a day. No Yuri, No Yaoi Check my Review for further details!

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  • Trapped In A Reverse Harem Otome Game: My Junior Sister Is Villainess original

    Trapped In A Reverse Harem Otome Game: My Junior Sister Is Villainess

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE R18 SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN LEVELUP ACADEMY

    Mới cập nhật

    Otome game. A reverse harem, at that. Seriously, no sane person would willingly play something like that. And yet, chuckle... I wasn't in my right mind. Tsk! To think I actually played this shit. Ahhh... well, no use denying it now. After dying, I got reincarnated, or maybe transmigrated would be a correct term, into the talented senior brother of the story's main villainess. Yeah, you heard that right. Talented. Indeed! This guy was so ridiculously overpowered that he didn’t even make it to the start of the story. Just straight-up died before even the main characters would be introduced. Like, seriously? Sigh... But worry not, I indeed got a golden figure to aid me. [Loading...] [Congratulations, You have been chosen as the host of The Villainess Guardian System!] Da Fck!! [Welcome, Host. As the name suggests, this system will reward you for aiding the villainess and plundering opportunities from the chosen ones.] The basic C****** Shit huh. [However be cautious, if the villainess faces defeat, the consequences will hit you five times harder. And if she dies, you will die five times more painfully.]

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  • I Will Kill The Extra original

    I Will Kill The Extra

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN SURVIVAL ACADEMY RAREBLOODLINE

    "He thought knowledge was power, but knowing the story won’t save him from me." ********** Extra Takes It All! True to its title, that hypocrite really does take it all. Opportunities? “Nah, the protagonist is too overpowered to even bother with them. I’ll take what he ignores—anything for my survival.” A harem? “I just help them a bit with their internal struggles, and somehow they keep clinging to me.” Items? “He barely uses them. They’re just lying around, so I’ll put them to good use.” And yet, that hypocrite keeps whining: *“I’m not supposed to be the protagonist. I don’t want to change the story’s outcome. I’ll just enjoy it from the sidelines.”* *Chuckle* Yeah, right. Somehow, I pushed through that mess of a plot. The other characters? They were decent. Well-developed. They felt real and believable. But that so-called “extra”? He was a walking contradiction. He started out on the sidelines, but gradually got more and more overpowered—until he himself became the story’s villain. As for the ending, don't even get me started. It really felt like the final battle was slapped together based on Authors hormones. The climax didn't make any sense at all, it was just a mess which totally twisted the logic that built up till this point of the story. So, what did I do wrong? I just cursed him a little, that’s all. And to be honest, he deserved it. Then, fate being fate, I ended up in that same novel that frustrated me. But unlike that Extra who cried about being thrown into a dangerous world and all, my situation is genuinely screwed. If I want to survive, there’s only one way: kill the extra. Yes, you heard me right. I won’t stop you, I will straight up kill. As your Professor, I’ll have plenty of chances.

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  • 3rd Rate Villain's Way Of Creating A Strongest Guild In History. original

    3rd Rate Villain's Way Of Creating A Strongest Guild In History.

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG VILLAIN KINGDOMBUILDING ACADEMY RAREBLOODLINE EGOIST

    1. Disclaimer: Zero to the strongest villain(setting) 2. Disclaimer: This is not the story where the main character gets Transmits into a novel (he is a villain cause of his action, so there are no hero or main female lead characters like other villain novels. so keep that in mind before you start.) 3. Disclaimer: no harem, there is a single female lead. .............................. After the death of Edwin Bald, one of the greatest villains in Eldora (a world of magic and fantasy creatures) the faceless god gave him an unexpected chance. Even though Edwin was a lich who had broken many laws of nature and committed countless sins, the god offered to make him human again, but not in Eldora. This time, he would be reborn on modern Earth. Additionally, Edwin could choose any blessings (trait/ talent) from the list to help him in his new life. Unexpected to him, Edwin Bald woke up in the body of Asuka Volford, a fatty, trash, molester, who was even cuckolded by his girlfriend, making him commit suicide. Also born to a noble family. The story follows Edwin, and how he step by step become strong, creating his own legend, and ultimately becoming the leader of Earth's biggest criminal syndicate which aims to conquer the entire world, from mere third-rate villain despised by the whole world

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