I like the writing. It's easy to understand and follow.
I feel like we have some similarities in taste on what we like to enjoy reading.
I feel the same here.
Maybe. But it's a chore for me to read straight romance between lovers as well as it is to write it. And I'm also inexperienced when it comes to that type of love. Truthfully, platonic friendships are much more fulfilling to me where I am in life right now. I've never had a lover before, so I can't say I know what I'm missing, but perhaps that's why I don't crave for it. And if a love like that isn't something I desire, I won't write poems about it.
History · _Haven
the info dump is well written and easy to read.
This is interesting
There, all countries became one, which was named the World Government. Their plan was to defend against the dinosaurs, and try to find out why did this happen. The thing they were most curious about was: For many years NASA was in space, how were they not able to find out that Earth was actually larger?
Fantasy · zeroven
what kind of beast would appear?
A large part of Antarctica suddenly collapsed, causing world-wide flooding. And to add to destruction, the extinct beasts from the ancient times reappeared, along with other unknown creatures.
Fantasy · zeroven
The novel is good but it need more improvement on its writing. Detailed description is good. But it could distract reader attention on more crucial scenes. In some of the chapter, I easily distracted because how detailed the description of some scenes. It makes me forget what's going on. I'm not quite to sure with the timeline. It makes me wonder if some scenes were fake and some scenes were actual reality.There's no problem with the story. But for me the reading experience is needed to improve. Like avoiding to used detailed description on every scenes and focused on scenes that needed to be describe with more detail.Overall I'll still recommend reader to give this a try.
I thought he's going to go with Miles.
This part is quite difficult to follow. Some of the description of scenes is difficult to follow. especially for non-native English.
Truck-kun always making trouble
The truck had hit Manav, who was running on the road.
Thrown in the Diesel Punk World
Sci-fi · PUNK_WRITER