Animefan_1

Animefan_1

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Animefan_1
Animefan_1
9 months ago
Posted

Writing Quality- I felt not this writing quality was top notch man 10 out of 10. stable updates - I have no clue about this stable updates but it looks like he finished his story in a year so he uploaded 105 chapters in 12 months I don't know I can't tell how many words are in each chapter but I feel it was above 1000. character design - I felt his character was all over the place and that he did really have a definite personality he's calling ang for wanting to go save his best and only friend the next moment he wants to help all the children. I also think there was no moment where I could see him developed as character starting of the story he was cold by the end of this story he was still cold and manipulator maybe a bit kinder but I can't tell if that was even noticeable until he helped children and that to the second time he helped clean the slums was because of a quest. overall I don't think character design our character development was really well done . world background - I mean he didn't really build the world's it fanfic and avatar is always 10 out of 10.

Animefan_1
Animefan_1
9 months ago
Replied to Animefan_1

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Animefan_1
Animefan_1
9 months ago
Commented

it's all right thanks for the amazing series.

Animefan_1
Animefan_1
9 months ago
Posted

I think this writing quality was not that good I can't complain my books are even worse. I have no clue about stable uploads since the story was published like 3 years ago I don't know if I'm going to read the other book he published. Its high school DXD what can I say about build world building. I don't think the characters went through that much character development if any but I only read the chapters 81 so I don't know if this changed at the end of the story.

Animefan_1
Animefan_1
10 months ago
Commented

He remind me of Paul.

"Until you pull the entire tree off the ground, no rest, " Said Kota while he stared at the big eyes of Magikarp.

The Monster: Trainer Kota

The Monster: Trainer Kota

Fantasy · VILLIAN_MAKER

Animefan_1
Animefan_1
10 months ago
Replied to octoberwind

Thanks man! I hope you like the next chapter.

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Animefan_1
Animefan_1
11 months ago
Commented

I thought he had photographic memory

Animefan_1
Animefan_1
1 years ago
Replied to Chaddts

That's totally alright my friend but, I recommend you read ch4,5,6 7,8 I'm going to upload these chapters today and if I can't finish all these today then on Saturday. This chapters will contain the stats of the players and every feature that they will obtain if you don't like the parts where the gods are talking about it I recommend you just read these chapters when I upload them and you should understand the story pretty well.

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Animefan_1
Animefan_1
1 years ago
Replied to Chaddts

Thanks for the correction man it should be updated. By the way how are you liking this story so far.

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Animefan_1
Animefan_1
1 years ago
Replied to Chaddts

Can you specify where ? Also thank you for commenting here my very first comment after restarting this fanfic

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  • Pokemon: life simulator original

    Pokemon: life simulator

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG DARK OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE

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    Yagami is a young man that finds himself unexpectedly reincarnated into the Pokémon world with no warning and no Powerful background to support him. Luckily, he has a life simulator that can help him sore so high above everyone that not even Arceus could catch him. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Disclaimer: I don't own Pokémon. The cover image is not owned by me. If you are the original owner and would like it removed, please kindly let me know. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any suggestions, complaints, criticism, ideas etc. Please let me know in the comments. I would love it if you would share your thoughts.

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