MrLeeroy1998

Or do you just want him to be OP instead of letting him progress like a normal person.

He has a right to be concerned about his brother/Father figure. Kidnapped, But influencing someone isn't enough to change the plot of Iron Man, and the chances of a butterfly effect are close to none.

The way I said he's wasting his stat points Putting them. On Luck when he? Could be spreading them out evenly.

I Disagree

I'm going to be honest. I'm not getting into the story, and I'm probably going to drop reading it. He had no reason to save Tony. If he knows the plot, then he Knows that Tony would be just fine and would get out. There is no reason for him to Is attempt to save tony.

The point of criticism is to give out what they're doing wrong. You're saying."Drop, bro, I get you. I get your concept, but your delivery is awful." isn't giving criticism. It's just you are insulting the way he is writing his story.

Yes, MC has a lot of skills, But for him to use Chakra, He's going to Need to know how to use hand seals, and he More Likely doesn't know how to use the hand seals. He needs to Use Chakra Correctly.

I don't understand how it's this hard to comprehend Bane was already a chunin with much more experience and Technique than the MC. So, of course, the MC is going to struggle Against someone who has much more experience than him.

I wouldn't say I like how he does not want to interact with the spirit elementals. Just because he got beat up, I feel that he could learn a lot from the elements, especially since they've been alive so much longer than him. He is more attuned to the elements than He Does. It seems that he doesn't want to have his pride hurt. And doesn't want to get beaten down. Then, to learn the Elements from the source itself.

OK, could you help me make sense of this? The MC couldn't fight the cooler herself and lost because she was too weak. And yet, the two sisters fused and were able to beat him. What is this FIC right now?