Laro
Great Story I like how you established the world first and not directly went to the fantasy part having an actual build up is refreshing. - Details - Grammar and Spelling: Great I couldn’t find any major flaws Story: Quite Interesting Main Character: Actually Evil and there is a reason for it we see how he became who he is.
Fantasy · Slumbering_Dragon_
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Webnovel 
Great Story I like how you established the world first and not directly went to the fantasy part having an actual build up is refreshing. - Details - Grammar and Spelling: Great I couldn’t find any major flaws Story: Quite Interesting Main Character: Actually Evil and there is a reason for it we see how he became who he is.
Chaos Guide
Fantasy · Slumbering_Dragon_