Joe_4875

when i saw poisonous monster i thought man i hope the author has his teacher get poisoned and then he can use some antidote from his store to cure her. u could of even had a 3rd rate villian that is trying to sabatage the teacher try to kill her in this fight by bumping into her when she was trying to dodge an attack and then when he cured her you could of wrote how they reacted to it. but nah just make a new villian pop up ur way. which usually means from out of nowhere with no back story

yeah but they still should of docked her contribution points or something to be fair. as they said her family knows how to replace what she lost so is that really a punishment?

is the authors note from when u released it originally to privliged or is it from today?

author if mc doesnt know about plot on that girls life can u explain to us how thats supposed to be? i mean i can understand him maybe not exposing he knows where her ex body guard is by him not wanting to expose to dude how much he is compromised but not warning her right now i cant see a good reason for it

since i didnt read this privliged did u really post 3 chapters a day because i only got 2

so maya needs to get a punishment too. its obvious she broke formation on purpose.

serves her right she was happy to see yanfei have to be a concubine lol. all yanfei has to say now is thatxits insult to 8th princesses kingdom to be refused for a slaves child