Dive_Knight_

Dive_Knight_

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2023-04-15 đã tham gia United States
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Dive_Knight_
1 years ago
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After reading up to chapter 5, now I have a clearer idea about the world presented and the characters that have appeared so far. I definitely think this croossover has a great potential; it's one of the most promising premises in MHA fanfics; at the beginning I thought it would be another generic Isekai or crossover of MHA, but the author is taking seriously the development of the characters, the construction of original skills and a world, where it seems, also coexists the alien lore of Mass-effect; which makes this story a breath of fresh air for MHA fanfics. Fans of science fiction, MHA and Mass-effect will surely love it. The only details to improve that I can find at this moment are that sometimes there are grammatical errors and sometimes the author's English feels 'weird', so to speak. However, despite those details, the story can be understood fluently enough

Dive_Knight_
Dive_Knight_
1 years ago
Posted

So far, (chapter 15) I've loved it, the idea of zeltrech as MC is great . And your style makes the reading easy and interesting at the same time.

Dive_Knight_
Dive_Knight_
1 years ago
Posted

I've barely read up to chapter 15 and this story already has me completely gripped. I'll try to read less quickly, or my anxiety won't allow me to be waiting for the monthly/weekly release of a chapter hehe. Thanks for the story author-sama