I will try and your intution is right it is my first book and as english is not my daily use language it is very difficult to make it fun to read
Vol-1-What if Ash(pokemon mc) is an isekai mcVol-2:- what if pokemon looked liked humans
This is too similar to pokemon its likeWhat if Ash(pokemon mc)will be pervert and got a new life
Not going give any criticism, you are doing good mate keep it up and try to avoid mind cnotrol because it doesn't gives any suspense or risk like everything can be done my mind control. And good to see an indian fellow as here nobody reads or writes novel
Thannks for the chapter
Are you indian? Beacause in india no one read novel ,so it is nice to see a fellow indian writer
Thanks for the Chapter
I think buff effectiveness would became half and he can't get the limelight making it imposaible to win the hearts of heroines
Is this novel not have mc pov because i really liked the concept but i hate narrator pov
Ty
Magic swordsman with Lust system
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