Denis_Dragoescu

Denis_Dragoescu

LV 2
2023-02-23 đã tham gia Romania
Hoạt động
Các tác phẩm gốc
Huy hiệu 3

Moments 14
Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
1 years ago
Commented

o the sentence should be "Thorkell, come, hurry, we got to get to the docks"?

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
1 years ago
Posted

The flow and pace of the story is good. Very well written! I want to see more so I've added it to my collection. I didn't found any errors in the grammar or typos as far I've noticed. Overall this is a good read.

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
2 years ago
Commented

First chapter: The start fabulous, the change of scene made me think the draw elf is the demon from the first scene reincarnated continuing the cycle of fighting the goods. The personal problems the "mc" has are on point a adopted child, with a racist brother, for the first chapter this is good.

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
2 years ago
Commented

Smartest person I've ever seen in medieval fantasy books or games.

"Those do not matter nor the blood of my son. It is by the bonds we share which is important that what makes us family."

My eternal hate for the Gods

My eternal hate for the Gods

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
2 years ago
Replied to mattfuncool

Good. Kind of a cliche, but works.

"I… I don't know…. I had a weird dream or… some nightmare about a field with bodies and people talking."

My eternal hate for the Gods

My eternal hate for the Gods

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
2 years ago
Commented

Racism!

"Brother! Don't you call him that, he is not one of us or even our brother?"

My eternal hate for the Gods

My eternal hate for the Gods

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
2 years ago
Commented

I don't know if this kids is the mc or not. But this kid feels something is wrong, makes me feal more intrigued on the first part of the chapter.

"I… I don't know…. I had a weird dream or… some nightmare about a field with bodies and people talking."

My eternal hate for the Gods

My eternal hate for the Gods

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
2 years ago
Posted

The idea of the story is fun, the book is easy on the eyes and the world the mc lives feels cool. The more you read the more you're gonna feel you want to read more. Updates seem to be on point. I want to see what's next.

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
2 years ago
Commented

poor man Trigor... My man surely has P.T.S.D

Denis_Dragoescu
Denis_Dragoescu
2 years ago
Posted

I like the story and the characters. I like how the author placed the scenes and how it makes me wanna be living in the book myself.

  • Mastermind: Crimes in Detroit original

    Mastermind: Crimes in Detroit

    Realistic MYSTERY GENIUS URBAN RIGHTEOUS

    Maxwell Tomson and Samantha Gray. Two bright minds come together after a tragedy that changed their life one year prior. They are tasked by their former mentor and friend after his death to pursue a list of dangerous criminals and bring them to justice. ///The novel will be updated twice a week *(f I have more time might do 3 or 4)\\\

    3 Chs 1 sưu tầm

  • Power: OVERLOAD original

    Power: OVERLOAD

    Action MAGIC SUPERPOWERS VILLAIN ANTIHERO URBAN INVINCIBLE

    Isao Tyson is a Japanese-American teenager whose life is turned upside down when he gains the ability to transform parts of his body into anything he can imagine. As he grapples with the consequences and responsibilities of his newfound powers, Isao must also navigate the challenges of adolescence and define his own destiny in a world full of danger and uncertainty. Along the way, he'll encounter allies and enemies alike, and face difficult choices that will shape his journey and the fate of those around him. Will Isao rise to the occasion and become the hero he was meant to be, or will his powers consume him and lead him down a path of destruction?

    36 Chs 35 sưu tầm

  • The Legend OF Sword Queen Zariel original

    The Legend OF Sword Queen Zariel

    Fantasy DARK SURVIVAL BETRAYAL REVENGE PRINCESS

    Zariel, daughter of Emperor Magnus Enverius Tetranimus, a ruler who has conquered 25 kingdoms. Zariel is a prodigy in sword fighting, and she excels under the tutelage of her trainer, surpassing even her father when he was her age. Zariel's life takes a dark turn when she is forced into a marriage with her fiancé to prevent a war. Unable to bear the thought of being trapped in a loveless marriage, Zariel takes matters into her own hands and kills her fiancé before the altar. She was banished from her own home and now hunted down. This was the start to her new path in life.

    4 Chs 1 sưu tầm