Thanx for your advice
Man I had changed my summary and I am going to add some gods like being to make the story more interesting. If you have more advice pls comment because of your advice I can see my book's are becoming better
Umm how many chapters have you read?
The main character is in the continuing chapters keep reading his name is Don Stephen and he is the son of Maclony
Bro can you please teach me. I want to improve my books . You can also give me an advice
Ohk I will see about it
I had made changes on my mistake now you can read from chapter no 1 and see the changes
Rewrite In which chapter you think we should do a rewrite . Waiting for your reply
I will see about it man
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original Ruthless Business man
The story revolves around the main character Dasagriva a sussiful business man . In this journey he will endure many people and some times he will endure mythical creatures at the end of the story he will become an unstoppable force that god's also fears he will become the Shadow Emperor the makes of widows and the slayer of Gods .118 Chs 196 sưu tầm
What should I change about this red eyed man
Ruthless Business man
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