yeah so he is weak
Due to fate, I was chosen as the incarnate and successor to the Dark Angel, once one of the most powerful beings in this world. The Dark Angel was killed by the Angels of Eden in a battle, called Armageddon.
Reborn as a Bully
Fantasy · Joyon
just the world? weak
Due to fate, I was chosen as the incarnate and successor to the Dark Angel, once one of the most powerful beings in this world. The Dark Angel was killed by the Angels of Eden in a battle, called Armageddon.
Reborn as a Bully
Fantasy · Joyon
you do not fix mistakes ..
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World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent!
Fantasy · DesEnd
dude you have said it in the comments ..how about you write this?.in the novel y'k? like write how he feels, how he may think he is being manipulated? about his determination to revive his mother at any cost? you have really given up on writing and expressing his thoughts
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World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent!
Fantasy · DesEnd
so he can't even voice his thoughts ? what kind of genius is he?he doesn't have basic logic
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World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent!
Fantasy · DesEnd
this child knows he can resurrect people?
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World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent!
Fantasy · DesEnd
no emotion in this sentence , you really feel nothing ..have you ever heard about punctuation ?
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World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent!
Fantasy · DesEnd
what cheap quality
"Aiden quickly comes to mommy," Alice yelled, thinking about the plane tears that threatened to fall any moment from her beautiful black eyes, but she held herself back.
World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent!
Fantasy · DesEnd
why this sudden change in perspective ? it feels cheap this way, just pick one and go with it, this is insulting
"Ah, still handsome as ever." Ignoring my own narcissistic comment, I walked toward the bathtub for the bath.
World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent!
Fantasy · DesEnd
*preserve
"Why can't strength be the ability to protect, to preserve life, instead of destroying it?"
Rebirth of the Eternal Sage
Eastern · WanderingShadow1