SuperTtruper

I felt genuinely angry when Sunny kept trying to push an answer out of Rin, and I absolutely love it when I can truly feel the emotions of a character, whether they're good or bad.

This is probably my favorite chapter so far!

Someone please save Sunny! He might die of shame if Effie and Rin work together to tease him! Thank you for the chapter.

I know it’s impatient and you may think it’s spoilery, but I have a question that pertains to the order of the story. Will there be a time skip a few months ahead like in the novel, with an eventual flashback to what happened after they entered the BrightCastle? Or will you write it linearly and start off with them meeting our favorite glutton and entering the City? In any case I’m just curious, please write it however you’d like.

Could this perhaps be the promised Lunar lore? ;)

Since he's a Pathfinder, perhaps his Aspect could be setting up static nodes that can act as points where he can see and hear through. His Flaw could be that his own senses weaken as more and more nodes are placed without removing previous ones.

I don't know how you pump these out so quickly, but I still love 'em. For another character, maybe you could make a rich BrightCastle Pathfinder that they somehow offend, causing him to try buying the broken [Mantle of the Underworld] just to spite them. Might make for a fun antagonist, or a potential ally in the future.