what the fuck is wrong with u author why r u making the mc acting like a simp and licking dog to his fiancee. and who the fuck gives powerful weapons and skills to others just because they r feeling guilty. what r u ? some saint,even saints don't do that . kindly think of a better way.
why the mc is still a licking dog to the heroine, that's a total letdown,he gives powerful weapons and skills for free just because he is feeling guilty truly.in literally mc is the trash more then anyone else. hey author will mc be like this all the time ? do reply
yes mc is worse then stupid he is a complete idiot with low IQ level truly disappointed
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Side-Villain With Protagonist's Broken Cheat
Fantasy · Black_Fat_Cat
it's not ntr it's netori man, and culture man do them all the time
'Maybe I should kill the Duke and keep his wife; after all, she is very important in the novel later on,' Theos thought, considering it a halfway mission. He couldn't defeat Duke Sonne now, and as a man of culture, he wouldn't NTR him either... Or if...
In My Favorite Novel As The Final Villain
Fantasy · TheCrimson
yep, he is the protaganist, if mc is so virtuous why is he coming between Lisa and him. Knowing full well that his fiancee was the protaganist women . he should have break the engagement and freed her. why didn't he do it?
man it would be worth 5 star if mc character really develops into true villain catagory. right now he is just a morally neive character. i mean who gives powerful weapons to a stranger just because he is feeling a sense of guilt.and I am damm sure u wouldn't ,so why did u make him do that. he is a heaven son, he will become powerful without anybody's help so why? and villain are not supposed to help protaganist just because they r feeling gulilty. it's a reduclious logic u have got here
mcs sense of morale is truly downside
why the fucking hell did he give that stong weapon to the protaganist ? haaaaaa.😡😡😡😡😡 mc is truly a idiot brain dead person . hey author why r u doing this ? change his character.he is truly neive, guilt and softness are not required in this world .
Liam was supposed to obtain the Holy Spear later in the story, but Amon gave it to him now to lessen his guilt for taking the Miracle Cube.
Side-Villain With Protagonist's Broken Cheat
Fantasy · Black_Fat_Cat
the character needs series development,he is neive and has too much to his mortals values that's needs to change
For some reason, he felt guilty when he saw Liam.
Side-Villain With Protagonist's Broken Cheat
Fantasy · Black_Fat_Cat
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original ENJOYMENT SYSTEM: ENJOYING THE LIFE OF CARNAGE
I would like to asked, if u liked the chapter do comment. if u don't like the chapter them also comment, so that I can improve myself. ===================== This is a story of a young boy of 22 who is short in height, his looks makes people feel disgusted in him,he was bullied throughout his life. even his own father and family abused him.He try to copeup in his life by thinking positive. but it was not ment to be.He tried to find love only to get humiliation in return.Nobody liked him he feeled like the whole world has shunned him. He prayed to God daily sometime cursed him for making him like this but not even God listen to him. but somebody or something did. he died and get reincarnated into a fantasy world. follow the journey of roman as he becomes the true evil villain in the fantasy world. ===================== english is not my first language, so please bear with the spelling mistakes and other grammers thankyou for reading14 Chs 31 sưu tầm
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Birth Of A True Demon
give it a try, if u like it leave a comment and if u don't like it then also leave a comment to let me know what u don't like, to help he improvise. This is a story of a young boy of 24 years old who was shunned by the world, living and witnessing the dark side of the world.He only wanted to live in peace.But the people and the world didn't want to let him live in peace. He was accused of the crime he didn't commit and send to jail, where he got bullied again and agin until his feelings, emotions left within him completely turn to pure rage and heatered and all that left was anger and rage for the world and towards humanity. He vows to take revange on those who bullied him in a most brutial way possible and make the world his slave.That day the whole world witness the birth of true demon. mc's true evil side will begain from chap 20 or so THIS BOOK CONTAINS HEAVY 18+ SCENES FOR BRUTALITY, GORE, RA@E, FOUL LANGUAGE, FOR ALL TYPES OF KINKY PLAY, READ AT YOUR RISK ENGLISH IS NOT MY STRONG LANGUAGE SO PLZ BEAR WITH THE SPELLING MISTAKES AND PARAGRAPH OUTLINE =========== cover art is not mine if you are the artist contact me and i will take it down.10 Chs 8 sưu tầm
that's what brain dead fools protaganist do . and mc is clearly one idiot
"If it were me on that battlefield, facing my beloved, I'd rather die myself than strike her down," he thought to himself.
Global Beast Mastery: Only I Can See the Hints
Fantasy · Yellowpuppy